rate_review Reviews

That story was great, although strangely very familiar....More Please!

I always appreciate authors who make the effort to write a more realistic 1st time sexual experience. I think your\'s is great, thanks.

AW! Very nicely done. And very realistic to since first times are always ackward...Ha! There are so few Harry/Hermione fanfics on this site, this is a refreshing change.

that was great. very touching, sweet, and real. not too many first times are good, but when you love someone, even \"bad\" sex can still be good. the detail in the story was amazing. it really drew me in. the way the characters were portrayed was really good. the way hermione was talkative and researchy but at the final moments at a loss. just great. i hope there\'s more to come, either more chapters or other stories.

Excellent. The images were perfect for two teenagers fumbling around the first time and sweet.