AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for I can\'t breathe!

by FrozenKiss

person kelly
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like you writing style. Love the story so far. :)
person sallie
schedule February 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. Please update!
person Mercika
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story, and am looking forward to were it is going. But Draco got bet up! That is so sad! Aww well ... at least Harrry came to the rescue!
~ Mercika
person reef
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going!
person Dai Cho
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!write more please!?i must know more to this!
person Meg
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good so far!! I can\'t wait to see what ya got coming up!! It doesn\'t matter that it\'s short, it\'s still good and full of slashie-smutty goodness!! Yay!! Update soon and if ya want email me and I\'ll beta, but I dont think you need it....Any..up..update!! It\'s really good!!
person jennifer
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more this story is so good:)
person crypticangel
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, That was just breath taking. I honestly don\'t know what to say beside I hope blaise gets his.
person insanity
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s pretty good, but you have some spelling errors.

I\'ll read more when you have it up. I like it so far, anyways.
person Keikokin
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack I hate seeing Blaise as a shithead! Ack! Poor Draco, this is awful. I am glad Harry and Draco are kissing but what abouaco\aco\'s injuries. And Draco can\'t stay with Blaise and the gang! He\'d be better off rooming with Snape! Too sad, must post something happier!