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that was very true and soo touching it went right to my heart good job

After haveing to go threw ridicule such as that i know how you feel. I dont what possed you to write such a deep plot but i havent been this moved im my ictiiction reading life time. Something about this story way way to close to home and it dont know if any one could really understand how wrong it is to think that who you love matter, The fact is at least you get to feel love. It hurts to know people think the ways most of the wizarding world is protrayed after going from school to school cause people couldnt understand that being gay is ok. Its hard to think that anyone anywhere would actully believe so storngly in something so stupid but its true. alot the people out there are homaphobic and they way you brought that in to your story was probly the best way i have seen it done although i\'m not at all suprised that dumbly was fine with it i think i would have to send you a howler if you thought of him as a biggot. But what i did notice is how actully so in character it so out of chracter. Its odd how it fits to perfectly how you can see how it works. Its scary.
Well i have wasted your time babbling.
It was an awsome story i dont think there should be a squill cause its not good to make this have any compatition with this cause nothing could beat your story.
Awsome job keep up the great work
I give you 5 stars!
-Z

http://www.foreverfandom.com/viewstory.php?sid=2089
please read that and tell me if the story is a bit... familiar...

this was such a sad story. i wanted to cry so much. the way you were able to portray all the pain and blindness society has. all the discrimination the world has for those who only want to love. this is definetly a fantastic story. please don\'t stop writing. it would break my heart.

*grabs a tissue box* This was... beautiful... breathtakingly wonderful.... I\'m left speechless. I don\'t know what to say. This fic is a very good example of something that is happening in the world today, and it\'s a shame to see homosexuals treated in such a way. However, I hope you continue because this is truly a piece of artwork. It deeply moved me, I just want you to know that your words had a great impact upon me. Oh my God...this was... amazing... keep up the good work!

Much love and luck!

Lily, the Psyko Vampirate

it\'s a very good story but i\'m still deciding of i think you should ryte mour or not cuz it might not be very fitting. a sequal might be good! but i think it should be all fluffy!!!!!! like they get married and the sequal gonna be all about their honeymoon and Seamus + hopefull his boyfriend will be their witnesses[2 their mariiage ofcourse!!] along with dumbledore, sirius ,and lupin may maybe they could huk up in your story too!) these are JUST op[inions!!!! i\'m not telling you wat 2 ryte. ~Narly Snarly

I am starting to tear up! That was such a cute ending!

That was awesome! You rock. I love it, it made me feel emotion, made me feel sad for them. anguish. That rocks that you can get people to react so well. Keep it up!
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kitsune

You portray so much truth in this story, that I wish it were all fiction. I live in Hicktown, USA, and I see this attitude in almost *everyone* here. I here kids in the hall, mostly boys, but more girls than I would have thought, saying things like if their kids ever even thought of something like *that* they would beat it out of them. No gay guys survive more than one school year here, though unsurprisingly, the bisexual girls lead quite happy lives due to the delusional thinking of guys that they might get in on a m/f/f threesome. *rolls eyes*

Worshipfully,
Arabiana

I loved it just like I loall all the rest. keep up the great work please update any unfinished fics soon.

Thank You So Very Much ;)