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for Living in Sin

by Serenitas

person Beth Ashkevron
schedule December 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it. Eutopia.
person RoschLupin-Black
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaah, thats such a sweet story. sob sob. people are bastards. i have two god-parents that are gay. i'm always getting into trouble for scrapping with those who look down on them and insult them. fuckin tossers. i agree with you. gender doesnt matter. im just waiting for when people will realise that
person thrnbrooke
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly! How did the others know where to find them? Did Hermione stage that? They all took the invisibility potion? Dumbledore helped them? A sequel? Something more!
person Thorn
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That seemed like it was going to be so much more of an agst story, but I'm glad it wasn't. I liked this, it was well written adn enjoyable. Keep up the good work.///_^
Thorn.
person BlackCat9
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very intriguing. I haven\'t seen much of this style of writing. i thought it was very good. And it gave me inspirationg (spurned from the harry goind to commit suicide) for my own slash story...Which is a big credit to you because you have no idea how long I\'ve been trying to come up with ideas for a slashy story .(Even though i have read other storie with a potential suidice, this is the first to spark creativity in the mind.
I thought this was a very impressive piece of work up until the end. i do not agree with the fact that Dumbledore sent them to stay with Sirius and Lupin. (Personally i think he would have found a way for this to be either dealt with or at least enough to let them stay at the school. other wise very good!
~BlackCat9~
person BlackCat9
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah I am reviewing again mostly because I had this sudden revelation as to why i can not write slash stories to save my life. i can never *get into* the role of someone who disagrees with homosexuality. it is something that I can\'t fully comprhend i guess. I know of people, and have even met a few. (Even a friend of mine thought it should be a \"civil union\" instead of mae\".e\"....
Which brings me to the revelance to you. I respect you more for that ability to get into a role quite unlike yourself and write it decently. it is a useful skill to have when writing.
~BlackCat9~
P.S. Sorry bout the babble...
person boots
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Normally... I wouldn\'t break down into tears over a story, but this one hit on a nail. My bestfriend is a guy and he has a boyfriend. They love each other soo much and yet the world just doesn\'t see it. All they see is they are different and they are cowards for being afraid of it. I think I\'m losing a the battle with my bestfriend over his sexuality... His mother... just keeps those insults going. How can you do that to your own child? Hate is just something this world needs to get over. You said it perfectly \"Love IS love and gender matters NOT\".
*Boots*
person Ashlea Stardust
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of work! Very well written. Perhaps it could have been longer though, maybe to include a detailed description of how exactly Draco and Harry were \"made examples of\". That would definitely gain the reader\'s sympathy. I do love these kinds of stories though - they make want to act out against the cruelty of humanity and all that. lol. Thanks again for sharing - it was awesome!
person Wolflady
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love is love and gender matters not! I wish everybody thought so. I think so.
Some of my dearest freinds is gay. I doesn\'t matter to me. As long as they love each other. :)
Write more, becuse I like it. REALLY like it.

Wolfie (also known as \"Wolflady\")
person J.V.
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i liked your story it reminds me of what i would give up to be with the person i love.