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by Erradhadh

person Akiota
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool story. continue please. yah...go draco, go harry! wohooo!
person mojo_jojo241
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i dont get the second chapter. *blinks slowly
person stacy
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why? Why do you do this to me? Do I have to beg you? WRITE MORE!!!! PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF EVERYTHING GOOD AND EVIL!!!! WRITE MORE!!!! EEEEEEEEEE
person jj the jet plane
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::screen starts to shake, then mouse then de:: why is everything shaking?!?! Oh wait that\'s me shaking in antisipation for you\'re next chapter.
person jj the jet plane
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::screen starts to shake, then mouse then de:: why is everything shaking?!?! Oh wait that\'s me shaking in antisipation for you\'re next chapter.
person Keikokin
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Angst its what for dinner! Ok, I suppose I can wait, but only if you keep writing the story so nicely. I like the scene in the Great Hall. How Harry can keep denying his love for Draco when he kissed him AGAIN. SO GO DRACO GET YOUR MAN!
person Keikokin
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If I beg enough will you post more? PLEASE? this is an angst feast love it!
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding me??!!! THIS IS GREAT! I love it! Psh, close to me...whatever, you have a wonderful talent, use it as you wish, steal any ideas you can, but please, continue this one soon!!!
person Kevin
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great start to what could be a great story. It has an original start and a Harry that is sick of being told what it is he has to do and what he wants and needs to do. I can\'t wait to see how you write Draco in this!
person yaoi fan extraordinaire
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i\'m expecting great things with this story Erradhadh. i like how you\'ve portrayed harry as sick anf tired of being the golden boy, and can\'t wait to see what you do withthe rest of the characters!