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by Erradhadh

person Hayley
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! that was SO GOOD!!! ahh!!!!! i luv it so far! update soon!!!!
person Keikokin
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
They had sex...in...the hallway! :::::::::::::::passes out::::::::::::::::shakes head Whoa. How does Draco know that no one will find out? And will Harry finally ditch Hermione PLEASE dont have him hurt Draco get the boys together again cause that was HOT wheww doggie! damn.
person Rebecca
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your story is too disjointed and confusing for me to follow easily. However, you have a good plot idea (so far) and I like your dialog.
person ammie
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this fanfiction was really supenseful, could you please write some more, i would love to read it!
person Shayne
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh, I hate to ask this, but did you really write the sex scene? It\'s just...in an earlier chapter you mentioned that you had never written a sex scene before and in the scene in Ch. 7 at one point you refer to \"Aye\" and \"redhead\" which is Weiss Kreuz, if I\'m not mistaken. So, unfortunately, that brings me back to my question. Now, I don\'t like to accuse people of plagiarism....but did you take it from someone else\'s fic?
person Galia
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bah! Humbug! I love it...but why aren\'t more ppl reviewing this wonderful piece of work...
person Keikokin
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow so Draco lied about being on the side of the good guys to get Harry in bed. Damn. Harry isn\'t going to like this. BUT maybe Draco will join up to KEEP HARRY!
person lou
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you lost me in the 4th chapther but good story. Did he run off wdracdraco or was it a dream of dracos.
person Meethveth
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue with this story. It was just getting interesting. What happens when Mione finds out that Harry was using her for a cover? Why did draco choose the light side in this story?

waiting for updates,
Merrideth
person Clevershade
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh that was great next chapter please hehe