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Chapter.... There thats 5 reviews its up to the rest of u pricks to bring in the next chapter

I\'m confused. Harry\'s behaviour is leteletely random. Why did he run out of Sly Slytherin dorms? Why was he there to begin with? Was Ron actually undressing Hermione in the common room, or were they in a dorm? And if so, why? What was that stunt with the fake Slytherin robes? How is Harry supposed to survive in Slytherin, if Voldemort is still around and the House is full of Death Eater children (who might very well be Death Eaters themselves, seeing as Draco\'s one)? Does this mean that Ha's f's forgiven Draco for lying, I mean, why else would he take up residence in his House? Will Harry turn Dark? Will he join Voldemort? I sure never understood fics that had him do that. Seriously, the man (if he is indeed a man) killed his parents! Why, oh why, would he join him? Doesn\'t make any kind of sense. Sadly, neither do parts of this fic. You, as the writer, might understand fully well why your characters (or in this case, your version of JKR\'s characters) act the way they do, but you have to make sure to put those reasons into writing, so that we, the readers, might understand, too. Then again, maybe I\'m being daft. Maybe it\'s all perfectly understandable. Ah, well...

Please tell me you\'re going to update soon, yes? Pretty please? lol

That was really good I hope you updates soon. KEEP WRITING GOOD STORIES PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE!

Don\'t wanna be hexedherehere\'s my review lol. That was so sad. You\'ve gotta post more so Draco isn\'t left in misery for too long. And poor Harry! First time he trusts it blows up in his face. Doesn\'t feel good. Make it happy again? Pretty pretty please lol

Oh my... wow... great story, but you are incredibly cruel...

-glare- Thats it?! WELL?! I want more. Now give it up. I know theres SOMETHING in there! -grumble-

CLIFFIE!!!