schedule
March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting its a good story but it needs more depth its to speratic. it would be cool it you went more in to it.
*Shrugs*
Oh randome note.... you dont pick your form it more or less picks you. thus peter the rat.. Yeah anyways like the story good job.
*Shrugs*
Oh randome note.... you dont pick your form it more or less picks you. thus peter the rat.. Yeah anyways like the story good job.
schedule
March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. please continue it.
schedule
March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!
schedule
March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this storys great, a little hard to read but really auesom. Please update soon i cant wait to hear what she says
schedule
March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it, but you need detail....detail is what makes up a great story. Don\'t hit me! *ducks*
schedule
March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh harsh cliff hanger! please update soon. ^^
schedule
March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope you continue with this story,it\'s a really good beginning.