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for Dreams and consequences

by happyinslc

person Megan Consoer
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Shiro Ryu
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It is a pity that you never finished this story. It is really quite good! ^_^
person azulkan2
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well crud! To short, I want more! Soon please.
person innogen
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOoh! Yes! I want more! Please? Uhm....not sure about twists... Filch should probably give himseway.way....maybe the love potion he used backfired and instead of her falling in love with him, it allowed her to accept the idea that she could love Severu despite the obstacles between them. Filch is ichy. But he probably thought all he needed to do was touch her when he grabbed her in the hallway for detention or something. However, she spent much more meaningful time with Professor Snape. So, it could be a sort of \"open your heart to me\" potion....something that only works if there is already feelings there to begin with? (I\'m borrowing partly from another fanfic for the name of the potion....but if the potion only works if there were feelings there to begin with....the \"antidote\" as it were....should be the consumation of the physical intimacy, which would also be some kind of soul/love binding as well...since it *is* a love potion and not a lust potion. So, if Severus takes her to bed, he had best figure out what has been going on with the youg woman. BTW, I just saw POA, and even at 13, Hermione is growing up fast. I hope she never really gets together with Ron....he is so thick! So, have these ideas been helpful? Feel free to email me. --Innogen Innogen_Cray@hotmail.com
person azulkan2
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More, more, are you serious? Of course I want more. I want Filch to get caught, I want to know what Flitwick wanted to give Hermione, I especially want to know what comes after the kiss. More soon please.
person spaz141
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Want more? You\'re kidding right? Of Course! and very mean of you to end it there. Thanks for the update.
person azulkan2
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story for a first timer. You are more brave than I. Also a dang better writer than I...I think it\'s a wonderful story. Haven\'t seen anything like it. Love the twisted way things have been set up. Course it gives me the shivers to think of Filch and Hermione. What can I say other than ew...Looking forward to seeing more and where you take us and how you get there. More soon please.
person spaz141
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. What\'s a girl to Th Thanks for the update.
person spaz141
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh, what\'s going to happen next? Is Filch going to be found out? I look forward to your next update.
person Maddy
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there,

I really have to say that I like your fic, eventhough it\'s your first one. You do a much better job than I did with my first. Hell, I still have to finish that one.

To answer your high qualified question,

How old am I? ---> For the fic I guess Hermione is 18 because of the time turner. As in knowing you personally, I thought you were 28. ;-)

Who is my fantasy? ---> For the both of you, SNAPE.

Should I keep writing? ---> Hell yes! Don\'t think of stepping out now.

What do you think should happen next? ---> I\'ll sit and patiently (not) wait.

Love and a hug, Maddy