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for Hermione\'s Seduction

by SugarSushi

person Jules
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have special soft spot for matchmaker fics. Crafty old AD!
I really enjoyed this story, it was very hot!
I look forward to reading more of your work.
person hermionebrowneyes
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your story is realy good i hope you write a sequel to this story
person Draco_Fan
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! I love the ending and the way you finished it was great! Update soon!
person icestar
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS FUCKIAWESAWESOME! Best smut i\'ve read all week. Awesome job.
person BerthaJ
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute, sweet PWP - but you could definitely use a beta, there were a lot of grammatical and spelling errors that distracted from the nature of the story.

Also, I\'m not sure physically how he could have rolled her onto her stomach from their previous position without removing himself from her - her legs would have been in the way ;)
person Julili
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Belive me it\'s good, really good
person viviane v.c.
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If it sucks??? This is a wonderful Hr/D Story!! If somebody says it sucks, I
person Apollonia
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fucking awesome! *going off to priut sut story, save on hard drive, and place print outs in Draco/Hermione literary library* ;)
person Trent
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding! You\'ve written a very erotic little piece.
person Midi
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. Pure Draco/Hermione smut. Very well written. Continue writting, you\'re good at it. Okay, byes.





Midi