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for an overwhelming desire to win...

by h0lden

person scifichick774
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Pansy is such a liar! I know, I know - way to point out the obvious. Still though. I hope Hermione\'s mum has some good advice for her - or at least a shoulder to cry on until she can get back to Hogwarts and straighten everything out with Snape.
person XChick03
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is getting good. Especially with the cliffie you left off with. I seriously hope you update soon.
person scifichick774
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UGH! Bad timing indeed! Really bad grrr at Pansy. Hopefully she\'ll get another red \'cheater\' plastered across her forehead, or even a worse hex. Yes. Worse is good.
person CliodnaHPFan
schedule April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT story!!!!! Oh, how I love SS myself... go Hermione! Go Hermione!!! Get him for all of us!!! Incidentally, er, could you email me when you add more? ;)
person elf821
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg no please let hermione get severus please i really want her to win and be with him let her find severud ted tell him of her true feelings, please!!!! make seamus go away ahhhhhhhhh please update soon thanks
person scifichick774
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! You can\'t let Pansy win! You just can\'t! It\'s not...right...or whatever. More soon please.
person Persia
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, the only thing I can say is HOLY FUCK!!! That was fucking awesome!!! Possibly the most erotic thing ever!

BTW
I can\'t believe he actually licked her fingers to make her think it was Crookshanks! I don\'t know if that\'s genius or insanity on his part, maybe both.
person Talene
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooo.......soooooooo nice! I\'ll be keeping up with this one! Please write more soon!
person sharkdiver
schedule March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a Hot chapter!!! He is rather more than a tad obsessive...LOL
person scifichick774
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Catching up with this fic...hee hee. So good. Loved the \'cheater\' in red on Pansy\'s forehead. And *happy sigh* Dare I hope that Snape won\'t want her to stop? More soon please.