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for an overwhelming desire to win...

by h0lden

person sammis
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story! keep it coming
person Becky
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. But Pansy is a little witch! I can\'t wait to see what happens!
person Meghan
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read the whole story in one sitting starting at 6 am this morning and ending around 9 30 am.

Hee... I absolutely loved the premise and its execution!

You must have more written very soon! I\'ll be waiting anxiously for the update.
person illnevertell
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been engrossed in your story all evening and I\'ll have you know that it took me Damn near forty five minutes to recover after reading the scene that describes the \" Perfume Incident \" Okay now you can add another ten minutes to that! ( It just hit me again when I was thinking about it ) I almost killed myself when I read it the first time. I almost choked to death and then when I stopped choking I was laughing so hard that the tears in my eyes made my mascara run rendering me almost completely blind ! As if that weren\'t bad enough I almost broke my neck trying to grope my way into the bathroom all the while I was hysterical and unable to explain myself to the people looking at me like I had just lost my mind! * KUDOS * That was the funniest thing I have ever read.The mental picture painted into my brain was ... Well, I can\'t find the words ... GREAT! now on top of all I mentioned above you have succeded in making me speechless! ( Which is no small feat as my husband could assure you ! ) I LOVED this story! I hope you never stop writing because you have a true gift! I Can\'t wait to read the rest so please please post more ASAP!!!!!! BTW Thank you for giving me one of the best laughing fits I have ever had in my life.

~ Jaimie ~

PS I forgot to mention that my back side is in agony because I literally fell off my chair and landed on it!
person scifichick774
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no. That stupid, stupid little bitch. Ugh. She\'s going to ruin everything!
person scifichick774
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...you\'ve got me wondering what Pansy\'s going to resort to now...
person Denali
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Argh! Why do I feel I\'ve read this before (and no, I\'m not claiming you \"stole\" it from someone, just that I feel like I\'ve read YOUR fic before)? Is it on any other sites in a completed or more completed version? It\'s driving me nuts! Oh well, I shall just continue to readhas I love every minute of this.
person scifichick774
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn straight that\'s not the last she\'s going to see of him! Okay, I understand why you had her kick him out. She\'s all emotional over the Pansy thing and Snape hiding his feelings about her until then, but is an itty bitty lemon soon so much to ask for? Is it?
person Sohara
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohohoh pansy is such a lying bitch. oh god is the harm irreversible? please say no please say no. Will Hermione and Severus end up together? Please say yes please say yes *looks up pleadingly*

and yeah did i say you have a great story here : )
Cheers !!
Sohara
person Amanda
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was great! I do hope you continue! Please, please, pleaseee continue! I really enjoyed it! So, please, keep going! I\'ll be waiting...