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This story was WONDERFUL!!! I was so gleeful when Hermione and Snape \"smote\" Pansy and all her plans! It was so great to see our heroine win the potions master. You really work tense plot well into your stories. I love works that let me try to guess what\'s going to happen, and yet leave me stumped with twists and turns ad evd every corner--you do that every time! Thankyou for sharing your wonderful imagination with all of us.EP WEP WRITING!

Wonderful
when i first discovered this story you hadpletpleted it to chap 19. I have tried to consider how else you could have taken that door slamming apart from a heartbroken Severus on the other side, and nothing else seemed feasible. So pleased was i to find that chapter 20 was up and you had done the only thing possible.
I\'m not normally soppy but it was so beautiful and worthwhile waiting for. Thank you

A very enjoyable story! That would have to be the first \"bet with a slytherin\" story I\'ve read that I\'ve actually enjoyed! (Though I think you need a better beta, if, if you have one, the whole story is rife with typos and spelling mistakes, and misuse of the word \"their\") Very well written, well done. Although, being the nasty creature that I am I would have liked to see something awful happen to Pansy (other than that awesome ass-kicking, mind you). Maybe you could write us a little one page epilogue? Anyway, thanks for the story!

:: Swoon :: That was just, :: Heavy Sigh :: Absolutely WONDERFUL! That was the perfect way to end such an amazing story.I loved every last word of it!
I am very happy to report that I managed to finish tchapchapter without injuring myself or causing grievous bodily harm to anyone or anything around me!
Allthough I think my kids were hoping to see me top my last two reactions to your story.I know that my dog hasn\'t been laying around my desk since I almost killed myself and took him with me. My husband is still giving me the raised eyebrow whenever he sees me reading on this site. At first I thought it was because he hoped I was getting inspiration from all this smut but now I realize it was because he was waiting to see my impersonation of a village idiot. I am now sad that the story is over. It wasgoodgood that I didnt want it to end. I just have to console myself with the fact that you can always write more amazing fics. I am really looking forward to reading your work in the future. KEEP THOSE STORIES COMING !!!!!!! Please.

~ jaimie ~

Hey! I must see the outcome of the bet. Can they make love all night!? :D

*giggles* I love the ending and loved the story!!! Excellent work!!

ooooooo no you can not leave us there

more now!

NOOOOOOO! He can\'t hate her!!! Make it stop!!!! LOL, great chapter...anxiously awaiting more

~Sharkdiver

Holden,

Thank you so much for dedicating chapter 16 to me. I LOVED it! After reading chapter 17 tonight my family was treated to a repeat performance of my reaction to the now infamous \" Perfume Incident \". Only this time while almost killing myself I managed to involve the dog. I was once again trying to grope my way the bathroom having been blinded by my mascara when I failed to notice the dog lying on the floor by my desk lets just say that there was a GASP , a YELP, and a really loud THUD! I tripped over the dog and went ass over teacups onto the floor. There I was sprawled out in front of the desk laughing like a lunatic mascara and tears running all over my face and the dog wanninnning away from me like his ass was on fire! Once I gained enough control over myself to open my eyes I looked up to see my husband looming over me just shaking his head as he started bending over to scrape me up off the floor. I can\'t even try to explain what was so funny becauveryvery time I try I turn into a complete idiot losing all of my physical and verbal abilities. Once again * KUDOS *! The part where Severus is scalded by the hot water in the shower Damn near killed me (and the dog!) and * SNORT * Picturing snape all scrunched up in the linen cupboard sent me into another fit of laughter that further confirmed my husbands suspisions that I am well on my way to becoming a permanent resident at the nearestby Hby Hatch! Thank you for now giving me TWO of the best laughing fits I have ever had.
~ Jaimie ~

PS OMG!! That cliffhanger may end up being what does me in!! That was just so... so... CRUEL!!! Please post more soon! Do you think they will let me have my computer in the rubber room ?

I want to slap Hermione, she is such a coward. But that is what makes this story so fun. MORE!!!! PLEEEAAASE!!