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June 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear,
I liked your story thow alot of spelling mistakes. Sometimes hard to read cause you are unclear about what you write. but overall i fine i had great plot and hope to see more of your storys with a bit less spelling words.
yours sincerly: Tina Lebeau
I liked your story thow alot of spelling mistakes. Sometimes hard to read cause you are unclear about what you write. but overall i fine i had great plot and hope to see more of your storys with a bit less spelling words.
yours sincerly: Tina Lebeau
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June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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January 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was really really hoping for something good here but the punctuation and grammar are greatly detracting from it. I\'d recommend a beta.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear, more canon rape on the innocent body of poor Hermione. A tale spawned by poor writing, out of the Journal of Abberant Psychiatry. Haven\'t any of you sad teenyboppers read the fucking books? Humilation will make you free. I don\'t think so. If you must insist on peddling tired old fantasies like this, why not just go out find a bunch of like minded kindred spirits and make up your own characters. In the meantime, get the fuck out of the fandom.
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I loved your twisted Lupin. I\'m a huge fan of Remus, but I loved how you made him into a bad guy! And I thought that was a great ending. I was a little dissappointed that the fic ended there, but hey you\'re the writer and you go where the muse takes you! All in all I loved this! I thought it had an interesting basis and a good ending. I loved it!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
We will never doubt you again. You have reasons for not answering all the questions right away. Really cool plot twist you just sprang on us. Very cool.
So does Remus want her for himself? What will Severus do when he finds them together? Very exciting.
Write more soon.
Cheers!
So does Remus want her for himself? What will Severus do when he finds them together? Very exciting.
Write more soon.
Cheers!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah Hermione!!! I knew she could do it! You go girl! Show the punk who\'s in control of her own life! Woo Hoo! I do hope you\'ll be doing another swift update! I really do love this y! ny!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn good story! No one would have ever suspected Lupin! Keep up the good work! I\'ve been enjoying this immensely!
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An EVIL LUPIN!!! You never read that! WOW. Chapters 7 and 8 were great. I am so glad I got to read them together or I would have been bugging you for another update. Still going to do that...but you can take your time. :-)