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for Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic

by Kyizi

person olka-polka
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why did you stop? Your story is beatiful. I like e ple plot, your witty and talented Hermion and sacarstic Snape... Oh, please,update ASAP!!!!! I\'ll be waiting for you every day at AFF :)
person AJS
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is stunningly good. Completely involving. Thanks you.
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just found your story and finished both chapters in one sitting. Fantastically well written! Nice storyline and lots of nice humor thrown in. I love how you\'ve portrayed both Hermione and Severus. They seem very true to canon and not much, if at all, out of character. Definitely looking forward to the next installment! Keep up the good work and update soon!
person N-
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I adore this. I\'ve read it somewhere else and was disappointed to see there was only the one chapter but reread it anyway. It\'s excellent even the second time around. There\'s not a thing to complain about! Your style is a joy and the story itself is compelling. I hope you do more soon! Bonus points for having a title that nods to The Police and *also* makes complete sense in relation to the story itself.
person uscarchie
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is good! Continue! :)
person scifichick774
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amaziegineginning. Really looking forward to more of this.
person AJ
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is wonderful. Forgetting to breathe kind of wonderful. Please say that you have this written and ready to post regularly? Please?
person bansidh
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing stuff. I was hooked from the point where you said that you hadn\'t read much SS/HG stuff. I really enjoy your Minerva and Severus. This piece seems ambitious and I wish you great good luck in following up this fantastic first chapter with a complete, cogent story. It does appear that all the bits are here for one. Can\'t wait to read updates! Thanks for writing. (Title\'s good too--love the Police!)
person XxphoenixX
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! It\'s fantastic! I can\'t wait to see what happens! It\'s hilarious, really. \"It must be the hair\" hahahahaha. And I love your plot line... Hermione\'s jump from sixth year to teacher might seem far-fetched but you make it very believable. !!!!!! It\'s great. Definitely. Have I said that already? I think that means I like it. I\'m going to stop now before I repeat myself sixty more times. UPDATE
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great fun. Please write more soon.
I can\'t wait to see how Ron Har Harry react to Hermione being a professor. And perhaps you can explain more about what a Hermante\' is. And how is Severus involved?
Cheers.