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for Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic

by Kyizi

person spaz141
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliantly thought out. I am impressed by the WIT. I like this Hermione, I hope she stays as true to herself as possible with her new powers. Thanks for four unbelievably long chapters so far, look foward to more as you have time.
person Maria
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That fic was definitelly one of the best I have read.
I really hope you update soon. Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person Bambu
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just encountered your story. It\'s extremely well done, multi-faceted, intriguing, and your characterizations are nicely delineated. The relationships are well within canon parameters and your extrapolations are a delight to follow. The length of the chapters is satisfying in that they aren\'t so short one feels cheated and they\'re long enough to really allow the reader to immerse themselves in the story. I will not plague you witmingming of hte next post, but I will check frequently just the same.
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you say you think its wrong for teens to leave school at 17 well over here in scotland we leave at 16 sometimes before that
person kirenn
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you\'ve seen the light *heh* and joined the exponentially-growing cadre of SS/HG scribblers. Write on!! I sincerely hope that this won\'t be your first (and last) excursion on this \'ship. you\'ve got me hooked--Hermione as *hermante* and Hogwarts\' newest Teacher, no less!! can\'t waiti to see her handle her class, esp. Draco and Goyle. . . . just still a little confused about Snapey\'s use of appearance potions--I take it AD doesn\'t know the true extent of his injuries then? cheers.
person Siobhan
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good work this is a truly interesting story and I can\'t wait for more.

I noticed in the third chapter when Snape was summoned you said that wormtail was there but I thought he was dead?

Ah well even the best of us make mistakes!

Update soon!
person ArienAstera
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! This is a really good story. I had to reread it bacause it took along time for you to update. And no wonder!! Chapter 3 is like a million years long!! This is not a complaint, just a suggestion... if you are going to write chapters *that* long, you might want to consider splitting them up into multiple chapters. It might intimidate people into not reading the story. And they really should because its good! But I was almost didn\'t read it until I found it on LNLS in 2 long chapters instead of one really, really long chapter. Just a suggestion though, I love the story!!
ArienAstera
person stargazer starluver
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey is this story posted in ff.net? i just asked coz i can\'t find it... i love your plot... i love sev\'s character and harry and hermione\'s relationship... good t you you did not make harry a snobby spoiled brat because i hate it whenever he is portrayed like that! nice work! updte!
person Becca
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fic is absolutely incredible!!! Please keep writing! Its refreshing to find someone who actually develops the plot and seems to truly understand the characters - Kudos!
person Sexy Kitten
schedule April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I like the story. When is the next chapter going to be up?? Hermione and Severus are so meant for each other so