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for Angelica's Sorrow

by devsgma

person appy lady
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! You art got going to cut the story too short are you? :( pleeeeeease don\'t :) Do you plan on writing any other stories when you are done with this one? Perhaps a Severus/ OC romance?
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21... Usually I curse insomnia, but tight I am thankful for it!!! I am sitting here with happy tears running down my cheeks, THANK YOU for not making me wait any longer to see them together!!!

This chapter is AMAZINGLY PERFECT!!! The way that Minerva determined why he had redone parts of Hermione\'s rooms, her spewing her tea when asked about Severus\' marriage to Narcissa & both Minerva & Albus assuming that Severus wanted Hermione as a mistress was BRILLIANT!!!

I am so glad that all of the misunderstandings FINALLY lit the fire under Severus\' (_!_) to tell Hermione that he loved her!!! I think that his questions were perfect & I\'m so very curious to see what the last 2 questions are?!?

I would be fibbing if I said that i don\'t care when they share each other because to be ho ASA ASAP would be fine by me;-)

I am looking forward to Angelica meeting Hermione, I am curious to see what they think of each other!!! Now I\'m REALLY looking forward to chapter 22!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<

P.S., As far as what will I do without me when this story ends, I have come up with 2 sollutions..... 1. We will have to email each other, A LOT!!! 2. You will also have to write another story, perhaps a sequel to this one!!! *
person Lindsay
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay i so over use the word love when it comes to this story! i love Severus even more and the whole bathroom thing! and the bed! you can almost see the dirty little thoughts swirling around his head lol
person Anon
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20... What a FABULOUS chapter!!! I just ADORE how happy Severus is & hope that it won\'t be short li!! !! I hope that he & Hermione will quickly get past the issue with Narcissa!!!

I am very much looking forward to Hermione\'s meeting with Angelica!!! I still have a feeling that she will be the one that brings Severus & Hermione together!!!

The rooms that Hermione will be in sound FABULOUS!!! You do have such a nice way of describing things that allows for quite a good visual image!!!

Once again I\'ll be looking forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 21, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20... What a FABULOUS chapter!!! I just ADORE how happy Severus is & hope that it won\'t be short lived!!! I hope that he & Hermione will quickly get past the issue with Narcissa!!!

I am very much looking forward to Hermione\'s meeting with Angelica!!! I still have a feeling that she will be the one that brings Severus & Hermione together!!!

The rooms that Hermione will be in sound FABULOUS!!! You do have such a nice way of describing things that allows for quite a good visual image!!!

Once again I\'ll be looking forward to your next update!!! Til chapter 21, Deb >^..^<
person jonelin
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, silly, silly hermione! woman, you are driving me MAD with this story. keep up the good story telling!
person mele
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeow! i read all nineteen chapters in one sitting! what a lovely story and i can\'t wait for the next chapter. aloha, mele
person Lindsay
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter! I really love Angelica... the bit about talking in riddles like Albus are you hinting they are related somehow ???? hmmmmm! anyway c ya tomorrow!
person CAH
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that\'s more like it! On to Severus and Hermione!!! I still don\'t like Narcissa and I\'ll never like Draco, but not because of your story, I have just never liked them! :)
person appy lady
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I\'m starting to think that your mind is almost as twisted as mine :)