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for Angelica's Sorrow

by devsgma

person Dumbledore
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t pay any attention to Salazar. I\'ll protect you. JUST GET THAT WOMAN OUT OF MY DUNGEONS IMMEDIATELY! After what that bastard did to her she deserves a real life. I\'ll get a body for her - you write the story.
person Salazar
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I put her there for a reason, you know! I loved her and she had the nerve to reject me. If you let her out of there I will come back and haunt you forever!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30... Another GREAT chapter!!! I LOVE what you had Arthur say & my favorite part was: It\'s so strange, I can be a rock for her, but without her I\'m nothing but quicksand. BEAUTIFUL!!!

Very interesting stuff happening where Angelica is concerned!!! I would really like to see her be willing to try to live in a borrowed female body & learn how to use magic!!! After all the time that she has been just a spirit or memory being I think she deserves to live again!!! If Severus & Neville are her only relatives their permission shouldn\'t be an issue with the Ministry!!! ce sce she has had time to get to know Severus I would think that she would LOVE the opportunity to hold & touch not only her relatives Severus & Neville but Hermione as well!!!

I look forward to seeing where you take this & I would absolutely vote against her choosing to die!!! Til chapter 31, Deb >^..^<
person mele
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh goody, i get to vote! okay, how about this... angelica can\'t die as she is so to let her spirit finally find rest she would need to go into a body and die. if she went into a souless body she could live out her days or choose to die. she shouldn\'t have magic - i thought only her one child had magic and she and her husband were both muggles? i must have missed something. you are already up to 30 chapters so i don\'t think you want her to stick around too long. stuck in a fate she never wished for, bound to the room of her torture, i think i would like to leave; if not through a body then poured out into the lake. maybe that was how the \"lady of the lake\" was created in king arthur? my two cents, aloha, mele
person shiv5468
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think she\'d want to die, in the hopes of joining her husband, but I agree that an ending with her still tied to Hogwarts until it ends would be cruel. Unless her husband is a ghost somewhere and could be moved to Hogwarts? Then they could be together again. Just an idea. I do like happy endings.

It\'s been a cracking story so far, with a nicely in-character Severus and Hermione; I do wonder what\'s in the package!
person Rosie
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve nerver reviewed anyones story before - but I just finished reading all 30 chapters and I love it. I say - gosh this is hard - let her live in another body.
person Redflower
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
don\'t make her stay bound to Hogwarts for all time - too mean! How about - Longbottom\'s mother\'s body? She should have magic if she is in a witch\'s body.
person appy lady
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think a combination of your ending ideas would work well. Perhaps letting her have a body for a very limited time in order to feel the grass under her feetnd ind in her hair, etc., but not have an actual lifetime in another body. What do you think? Oh, I definitely think she should get a woman\'s body if she does get one at all.
person Lindsay
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow another great chapter. im glad your taxs are sorted. keep posting okay?;0)
person Lindsay
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow another great chapter. im glad your taxs are sorted. keep posting okay?;0)