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for Angelica's Sorrow

by devsgma

person midnight tiger
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my goodness woman! I started reading this fic yesterday and just could not stop! I feel the story line moved just a little fast in the beginning but otherwise the ideas you presented were marvelous! The spell, and the mobius strip were wonderfully thought out and I LOVE Angelica! her connection with Severus is great, as is her new found one with Hermione. I can
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 35... This is a GREAT chapter!!! You really gave us a good look at Harry\'s bitterness & hate toward Severus!!! I am so glad that Angelica felt the need to be protective & I\'m sure that Severus appreciates it too!!! I think that he was a bit shocked that Harry would go to the extent of the killing curse!!! I also like how you covered Angelica\'s part in what happened to Harry!!!

I am really curious to find out what the strands in the bier are?!? I can just imagine if they were dealing with different circumstances that the numerous books would be the most awed portion of the room by both Severus & Hermione!!!

I hope that Harry will REALLY listen to what Minerva said to him!!! If he truly values Hermione at all he will allow her to be happy!!!

Til chapter 36, Deb >^..^<
person jonelin
schedule June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well, i hope harry has learned his ln non now! silly boy. i enjoyed the dialogue between severus and angelica about harry. another fabulous chapter as always. :)
person azulkan2
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Harry was actually going to try and kill Severus. Wow, never expected that, but Sev did a pretty good job of goading him. Can\'t wait for more.
person Claribel
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is still such an enjoyable story. I can\'t wait to see Severus and Harry battle it out for Hermione - so long as Severus wins of course. The relationship between Angelica and Severus is really lovely to read, almost maternal some how. Anyhow, please keep updating.
person Redflower
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, you certainly don\'t disapoint - I am so glad I started reading your story. Can\'t wait to see what happens next.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 34... Another FABULOUS chapter my dear!!! I do believe that Harry has opened a can of worms that he will regret having opened!!! You have really kept that part of Harry intact here, leaping before looking, acting before thinking of the consequences, PERFECT!!! Not only does he have Hermione quite up in arms, but since she told Severus he now has an extra battle to face, this should prove to be quite interesting as well as entertaining!!! I do hope that his not so honorable intentions will come back & bite him on his behind!!!

I am curious to see if Angelica will be able to read Harry\'s true intentions?!? She knows that Hermione & Severus are happy & in love & I have a feeling that she would do whatever she could to protect her family!!!

Can\'t wait to see what\'s in that room as well as finding out what Angelica\'s take is on Harry!!! Til chapter 35, Deb >^..^<
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 33... Behind again, very busy weekend here!!!

\'Don\'t like the way she\'s looking at me. Good thing there are witnesses. Maybe shouldn\'t have said anything yet.\' LOVE thi line & hope that Harry will keep it in mind that he would be wise not to piss her off any more than he already has!!! I am hoping that he will start seeing Sarah Matthews & find that he is quite taken with her so that he will leave Hermione & Severus alone!!!

I am really wondering what Albus would think if he knew of Harry\'s plans?!? I have a feeling that he wouldn\'t sit by & do nothing!!! Looking forward to seeing what they find in the sealed room as well as seeing Angelica\'s character again!!! Til chapter 34, Deb >^..^<
person jonelin
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACK! i\'m so happy hermione TRIED to put harry in his place, but blar and double blar! if he screws this all up, i know who to blame! it\'s the author! yes, and i will hunt her down!! ;)

another great chapter, my dear. as always.
person azulkan2
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry is an idiot. Makes for a nice change nonetheless. Usually it\'s Ron that\'s the idiot. Glad that Hermione at least tried to put him in his place. She should know that he can be thick as a brick sometimes. I hope Hermione tells Severus. Wouldn\'t want him to get the wrong idea. Can\'t wait to see what happens when Angelica gets hold of Harry however. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Hurry please.