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for Angelica's Sorrow

by devsgma

person Deb >^..^< . .
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue... Behind, yes, but I had every intention of coming back to read your story!!! I am sitting here in tears, this chapter is ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!! I am hoping that you will write a sequel to this in the near future!!! Your poem is PERFECT & I would very much appreciate it if I could use it in a scrapbook about my mom, please let me know if it\'s okay? Thank You for sharing your story!!! Deb >^..^<
person Princess
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a great fic, I love that you decided that Angelica was going to finally pass on. Good choice. Can\'t wait for more. Keep up the amazing writing!
person Midnight Tiger
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, you have me crying again!!! I understand her desire to go but...I feel as if I, too, have lost a friend. How will Hermione react? or will Harry\'s condition over power that sorrow? Will poor Severus get through it and still ask Hermione to marry him? ::sigh:: so many questions. I need to go spend some time snuggled on the couch with my two friends, Ben and Jerry (chocolate and lots of it!) and think a bit. thanks so much for posting. ::huggs::
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 36 & 37... I have been EXTREMELY busy with company, refinancing a other things & I have gotten WAAAAAAAAAAY behind!!!

These 2 chapters are INCREDIBLE!!! I am hoping that with Angelica\'s unknowing aid that Harry will get better & then leave Hermione alone!!!

I feel so bad for Severus!!! I know that he understands why Angelica wanted to be free, but I can only imagine the pain & hurt that he must be feeling!!! I am hoping that blowing up Salazar Slytherin\'s rooms will help a bit, but it will never be enough to make him forgive what Salazar did to Angelica!!! I am glad to see that he was able to have the time he did with her & I do wish that she would have waited for the wedding!!!

Can\'t wait to see what will happen next!!! Til chapter 28, Deb >^..^<
person Jess
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally! I was able to get to this point! (After AFF went down for a few days, I was wondering, LOL) Anyway, wonderful story! I can\'t wait to finish it! It\'s really kind of odd; the first part was wonderfully written. You then seemed to lose what you were heading for, but only for a few chapters, but now, at this point, everything is becoming cohesive again. Again, wonderful job! I can\'t wait the the next chapter!
person azulkan2
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great ending. Didn\'t think that it would end that way. What a creep Salazar turned out to be. And Severus had to agree with me to be blasting his rooms. Glad Angelica finally finds peace.
person azulkan2
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great ending. Didn\'t think that it would end that way. What a creep Salazar turned out to be. And Severus had to agree with me to be blasting his rooms. Glad Angelica finally finds peace.
person shiv5468
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fingers crossed it loads, eh?

A nice chapter to cheer me up, but only an epilogue to look forward to. I hope you\'ve got another story lined up after this one. It\'s been an enjoyable story, with well-rounded characters.
person Redflower
schedule June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is the fourth time I\'ve tried to review - hope it gets through this time. I continue to love your story. Please update soon.
person midnight tiger
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my, not long enough!!! (just kidding) but you do make me long for more at every chapter end. I really like the books on the shelf...i am a book lover and something interesting and new always perks my interest. :) also Harry\'s break down was wonderfully handled. thanks for posting.