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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11... I do enjoy the playful attitude from Poppy!!! Even if Severus won\'t admit it, her comic relief has got to be a good thing under these circumstances!!! Later he will also be thankful that she forced him to thi this has got to take a toll on him!!!
This whole thing is quite an interesting process!!! Severus seems to be able to get through quite a few memories in a short amount of time!!! I like the idea of the other teachers taking turns in returning Draco\'s memories to him, the faster they can get them returned, the sooner they will be able to see if he is cured!!!
I\'m glad that Albus can feel Angelica, but I don\'t think she is willing to allow him to feel her as strongly as Severus does!!! I think she feels a stronger bond to Severus because of him doing the procedure!!! At least now she knows that he wasn\'t lying & isn\'t changing the memories!!! I am still hoping that they will be able to figure out a way for her to help in all of this!!!
I am curious to see if Severus will happen upon any more interesting memories involving Hermione?!? I know he is going through them quite quickly, but I wonder if he will find something that really stands out that may let him know who that other memory was about?!?
Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<
This whole thing is quite an interesting process!!! Severus seems to be able to get through quite a few memories in a short amount of time!!! I like the idea of the other teachers taking turns in returning Draco\'s memories to him, the faster they can get them returned, the sooner they will be able to see if he is cured!!!
I\'m glad that Albus can feel Angelica, but I don\'t think she is willing to allow him to feel her as strongly as Severus does!!! I think she feels a stronger bond to Severus because of him doing the procedure!!! At least now she knows that he wasn\'t lying & isn\'t changing the memories!!! I am still hoping that they will be able to figure out a way for her to help in all of this!!!
I am curious to see if Severus will happen upon any more interesting memories involving Hermione?!? I know he is going through them quite quickly, but I wonder if he will find something that really stands out that may let him know who that other memory was about?!?
Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry to be a bit behind, this weekend was BUSY, taxes, laundry, sick little one... didn\'t leave me as much time as usual!!!
Chapter 10... Once again I am very impressed by the way you write these characters & the way that they interact with each other!!! In most stories I am not a big fan of Narcissa, but in this one she is more like a real mother, not some snooty bitch that is only interested in keeping up appearances!!! You make her caring for her son the priority & the reasons for her fear of & lack of love for Lucius obvious!!! The conversation between her & Severus was interesting, but I must admit tI\'mI\'m glad he made it clear that she is a friend only!!! I am glad ttheythey do have each other to speak to & confide in, it\'s good for both of them during this trying time!!!
I also like the way that you are introducing Angelica a little more in each chapter!!! I think that she & her conversations with Severus are going to be a key to recovery for those 4 people!!! She seems to be a bit more relaxed now that she knows it is a male that Severus is working with!!! I am hoping that she will be able to shed more light on things as we go along!!! I hope that shel col come to trust Severus so that she can help him more!!!
Albus is, well Albus!!! His timing is just as bad as ever!!! He seems to walk in at the worst times;-)
I am looking forward to seeing how the memorarcharch goes & am hoping that Severus will find out exactly what happened so they can all be healed!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<
P.S., Thank You for your kind words in part 10, I really appreciate them!!! I hope that what I write will show that I appreciate the time an author takes to write & then share their work!!! Please feel free to contact me, one never has too many friends, even if location means they can only be the cyber version*
Chapter 10... Once again I am very impressed by the way you write these characters & the way that they interact with each other!!! In most stories I am not a big fan of Narcissa, but in this one she is more like a real mother, not some snooty bitch that is only interested in keeping up appearances!!! You make her caring for her son the priority & the reasons for her fear of & lack of love for Lucius obvious!!! The conversation between her & Severus was interesting, but I must admit tI\'mI\'m glad he made it clear that she is a friend only!!! I am glad ttheythey do have each other to speak to & confide in, it\'s good for both of them during this trying time!!!
I also like the way that you are introducing Angelica a little more in each chapter!!! I think that she & her conversations with Severus are going to be a key to recovery for those 4 people!!! She seems to be a bit more relaxed now that she knows it is a male that Severus is working with!!! I am hoping that she will be able to shed more light on things as we go along!!! I hope that shel col come to trust Severus so that she can help him more!!!
Albus is, well Albus!!! His timing is just as bad as ever!!! He seems to walk in at the worst times;-)
I am looking forward to seeing how the memorarcharch goes & am hoping that Severus will find out exactly what happened so they can all be healed!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<
P.S., Thank You for your kind words in part 10, I really appreciate them!!! I hope that what I write will show that I appreciate the time an author takes to write & then share their work!!! Please feel free to contact me, one never has too many friends, even if location means they can only be the cyber version*
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m a good bit behind today, been too BUSY!!!
Chapter 9... Once again I find myself absorbed by these characters!!! You write them with such personality that you can almost feel their emotions!!! Narcissa\'s love for her son is very evident!!!
I could really understand her anger about the Granger\'s, but could find her understanding completely believable after the explanation that Severus gave her!!! I also felt touched by the compassion that Severus showed Narcissa!!!
I like the bits of silent bickering between Severus & Poppy as well as the attitude Severus enjoys giving Albus!!! I really like how much you make Severus seem so human by showing him feeling so many different emotions!!!
I guess I can take it that Angelica may not be able to be of assistance? I am wondering how she will react when Severus starts his work with Draco!!! I am wondering if she hasn\'t done anything yet because Severus hasn\'t actually started the process on a human yet, it has all been prep work? Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! I will be watching for chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
Chapter 9... Once again I find myself absorbed by these characters!!! You write them with such personality that you can almost feel their emotions!!! Narcissa\'s love for her son is very evident!!!
I could really understand her anger about the Granger\'s, but could find her understanding completely believable after the explanation that Severus gave her!!! I also felt touched by the compassion that Severus showed Narcissa!!!
I like the bits of silent bickering between Severus & Poppy as well as the attitude Severus enjoys giving Albus!!! I really like how much you make Severus seem so human by showing him feeling so many different emotions!!!
I guess I can take it that Angelica may not be able to be of assistance? I am wondering how she will react when Severus starts his work with Draco!!! I am wondering if she hasn\'t done anything yet because Severus hasn\'t actually started the process on a human yet, it has all been prep work? Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! I will be watching for chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I must have missed that somehow! Overall it\'s a very sad and engaging story, and I\'m enjoying it immensely. Keep up the good work!
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story and plot. I\'m really intere to to see what will happen. Me being a perfectionist, I did notice a few spelling mistakes, just an FYI. It\'s Fawkes, floo, and Slytherin. Can\'t wait to read more!!!
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Believe or not my given name is Angelica. I learned about your fic over at Yahoo. I like your style of writing. The story so far is very good. I loved the part of Severus not having enough patience left. That was very witty. I hope you\'ll be updating soon, since I\'m totally into this fic. Thanks for entertaining me.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 8... A very interesting turn here, Angelica speaking to Severus!!! As much as what Severus seems to care for Hermione I really can\'t see him risking her being lost to him completely!!! Angelica sounded very angry, almost like a protective mother where Hermione is concerned in Severus\' thoughts!!! This makes me wonder if Angelica may not be the real help here, more than the magic or the pensieves, because of what she is, but more because of what she isn\'t?!? I just wonder if she is angry enough about what happened to her to be willing to help Severus keep anything of the like happening to Draco & the others?!? If she can get into Sev\' h\' head.................
I can\'t blame the Granger\'s for being angry & afraid, they don\'t understand enough to make a complete & rational choice for Hermione!!! I am hoping that Draco will recover & then it will give them something better & more positive to look forward to!!!
Well you are doing a FABULOUS job of keeping this very interesting!!! I now have even more questions about the events yet to come in this WONDERFUL story!!! I am sure that they will be answered in due time*
I can\'t blame the Granger\'s for being angry & afraid, they don\'t understand enough to make a complete & rational choice for Hermione!!! I am hoping that Draco will recover & then it will give them something better & more positive to look forward to!!!
Well you are doing a FABULOUS job of keeping this very interesting!!! I now have even more questions about the events yet to come in this WONDERFUL story!!! I am sure that they will be answered in due time*
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Who is Angelica and what does she mean to Severus? Maybe they were in love at some point? Looking forward to finding out the answers! Keep up the good work!
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story very much!! It is very well written and I so can\'t wait \'till the next chapter!! :)
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No flames here. Just a great big thanks for such a great story. Very interesing start thats for sure. Can\'t wait to see what are in the diaries. More soon please.