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Hi again *waves* why is he is going for second best?? hello someone needs to knock some sense into him !!!!!!!!!!

Wonderfully well written story!!! I really really hope this most recent twist (SS/NM) turns into nothing! He needs Hermione. Fervently held belief of mine... go figure. Please please please! Make NM go away now, please please please!!! Pretty please too.

Your story is still captivating me! I\'m glad you have been able to update it so often :) I particularly like all the avenues you are leaving open for your plot to twist and turn, too many stories are just point A to pointnd dnd done. Keep up the good work and the frequent updates !

wow that\'s another great chapter!

Chapter 14... HOLY MY, this is another FABULOUS chapter!!! The spell is interesting, but the way it has to be countered is even more interesting!!! I absolutely love how your mind works!!! I am hoping that he will get some information on this from Draco or Ginny so that he won\'t even ask Narcissa!!! IF he does end up asking, I am still hoping against hope that Narcissa will not want a relationship with Severus!!! (Does ing ing help? If so, PLEEEEEEEEEASE don\'t let them be together!!!) I am so glad to see what appears to be the beginning of recovery for Draco!!!

I really do like how Angelica has taken to Severus!!! In another place & time I do believe that they would have been perfect together!!! She really seems to be able to give him a sense of peace!!! I am curious to see how Angelica takes to Hermione, I think she will like her very much!!!

I am looking forward to finding out more about the spell as well as seeing WHO it will be that will be doing the counter curse for Hermione!!! Til chpater 15, Deb >^..^<

Chapter 13... I am so very much hoping that Narcissa would put an end to any thought of a relationship if Severus brings it up to her!!! She already knows that his heart isn\'t in it as it was years ago & I don\'t think she would want a half-hearted relationship considering all she has been through!!!

I do like the new information about the wand & am hoping that Severus will be able to find what he is looking for quickly!!! If he doesn\'t find the right strand right away I hope he finds something that will show him that he should not count Hermione out yet!!! I am really looking forward to seeing what exactly the curse was that had caused this!!!

I also like the continued bit of humor that centers around Poppy & Severus!!! I really think this is a nice addition to an already FABULOUS story!!! Til chapter 14, Deb >^..^<

I don\'t trust Narcissa - and I can see her trying to take Severus away from Hermione.

Chapter 12.... The new bits & pieces that you add to this story make it become better with each chapter!!! The situation with Severus seeing Draco\'s memories in his dreams along with the humor between Severus & Poppy, plus Severus\' sarcasm toward things that Albus says all add character to the story!!!

I also LOVE how Severus takes 2+2 & finds a way to make it equal 7!!! He has only seen tiny portions of Hermione & he has already decided that he has it all figured out!!! I have to agree with Angelica, he is an honorable man, but he has spent so much time perfecting self degradation that he can\'t see things any other way:(

I am glad to see that Angelica\'s trust in Severus is growing!!! For her to see as as being like her husband is a plus & I think that her requests of him & his willingness to agree to them will only help build that trust even more!!! I am curious to see what information he will find in the newest diary?!?

As always I am looking forward to MORE!!! Til lucky 13, Deb >^..^<

P.S., As happy as I am for your frequent updates ( & believe me I do very much appreciate them!!!) I would gladly wait between them so you can do other things!!! I know that the wait will be more than worth it!!! Your beta sounds like my kids, all 4 think that I am mean, but it sounds better coming from myear ear old than my 22 year old;-)

I am absolutely loving your story! It gives me goosebumps. I think your Severus is wonderful. He is in character, yet much more. Please continue to update as often as possible--I can\'t wait : )

I think your story is going well. I think i may be an unpateint person but this story is going by a tad slow, when i got to chapter twelve and relized there were no more chapters, I was so agitated i wanted to break my computer.