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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Still reading, still loving it. Just one query, why is Snape still in the looney bin, he seems to be san sanest person out there.
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March 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t review this nearly as often as I should--truly one of the best stories I have ever read. The plot is involving and original, the writing is impeccable, your characterization is spot on, and I don\'t count my day complete until I have read each new chapter. You are a very talented writer!
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmmmm.....curiouser and curiouser...I\'m thinking that the reason they were killed is because they were connected to Snape somehow? Or maybe no one killed them at all and instead they killed themselves while under some mind control or something. lol, this story is amazing :)
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know the exact word that I need to describe this chapter, and I\'m to lazy for search into my spanish/english dictionary. But what I mean to say is that this chapter has certain cotidianity (?) and depth, it was beautifully crafted, as if the shadows, the darks and the shines you want to describe were there in every dialogue and gesture of your charachters.
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another powerful, emotional and developmental chapter here. Sadly no Sev, however.
You know you are writing an important peice of fic when your readers are having nightmares about it. More specifically about Snape in the asylum trying to throw himself down a flight of stairs while you watch hopelessly.....
well done, and spot on!
You know you are writing an important peice of fic when your readers are having nightmares about it. More specifically about Snape in the asylum trying to throw himself down a flight of stairs while you watch hopelessly.....
well done, and spot on!
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am such a sucker for a GOOD murder-mystery. You want to know my theory? It was Petunia, determined to rid the world of the evil mad wizards that she feels have been ruining her life - maybe she was madly in love with James Potter but her bitch/witchter ter actually married him? So she finally cracked and started madly killing any wizard she could find, with a Big Knife.... or perhaps not.
Whatever the answer, I am very much enjoying this story and waiting eagerly for updates (just ask my husband, exiled to watch telly while I commandeer the computer ... again). Keep it up!
Whatever the answer, I am very much enjoying this story and waiting eagerly for updates (just ask my husband, exiled to watch telly while I commandeer the computer ... again). Keep it up!
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March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok. Time to put on my thinking cap. Whodunnit? Can\'t be Snap-- he was locked up. Could be Ron but what motive would he have for the others? Don\'t think its Dumbledore... Not Alice... I\'d say Nicholas but that would only work for Harry not the others... Hermione was out of the country so not her... What about Francois? We don\'t know that much about her... And then there\'s that cryptic appearance by Draco at Harry\'s funeral. It would be just too obvious to be him, so not Malfoy. Hmmm.... I\'m cofused. Have we encountered the killer yet in the story? There\'s just no one that seems likely yet. Maybe lebolebolt himself??? :D sigh....
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is incredibly good! I\'ll be on vacation for a week and I won\'t be able to read the updates, so I\'ll be doing a lot of reading when I get back home. Excellent plot, fabulous writing.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, the plot thickens yet further. I have no idea who dunnit, still plenty of plot to go eh? This is a really satisfying story to read. I love your characterisation. I find your Dumbledore really shifty and unappealing. Snape seems suprisingly sane in an insane way - he has way too much bottled up that man. Hermione has a suitably other-worldly layer over her \'canon\' characteristics. I like the way you draw on different characters as the story progresses - lots of suspects, I\'m sure lots of clues (I\'m oblivious as usual) and all beautifully written. What a pleasure.
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a terrific story--I can\'t believe you only have 65 reviews! Great Snape, great Hermione, great plot twists. I love how Hermione\'s time in Tibet has especially suited her for waiting Snape out. This is considerably more plot-driven than the usual fanfic, and it\'s a very interesting plot, too. I\'ve really enjoyed reading the new installment every morning--thanks for sharing it with us.
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