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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yippiiii. I\'m so happy for Severus.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Curse you, curse you, curse you!!
I\'m now finding my attention drifting through the day to try to puzzle out the mystery before you reveal the answer to us (fyi, I\'ve been betting on Neville for the past 10 chapters or so, my snotty earliermentment about Alice notwithstanding) but THIS is why I hate mysteries. My poor compulsive personality won\'t let go of this story! If you\'d been kind enough to be even a mediocre writer, I wouldn\'t be so caught up in this but noooooo, you have to be talented with just enough whisps of whimsy (Old Jack, the kids picking up on every curse word), insight (Ron\'s reaction to kissing Francoise, the perverse satisfaction of Snape getting away with no haircut) and suspense (are Snape\'s instincts that Hermione is in danger accurate?).
In case it isn\'t clear, I am so enjoying this. You\'ve even given me a desire to go back and read \"Heart of Darkness\" (which I loathed my first time through, so that\'s saying something!).
Looking forward to your future posts ~ this story and any others you may come up with.
I\'m now finding my attention drifting through the day to try to puzzle out the mystery before you reveal the answer to us (fyi, I\'ve been betting on Neville for the past 10 chapters or so, my snotty earliermentment about Alice notwithstanding) but THIS is why I hate mysteries. My poor compulsive personality won\'t let go of this story! If you\'d been kind enough to be even a mediocre writer, I wouldn\'t be so caught up in this but noooooo, you have to be talented with just enough whisps of whimsy (Old Jack, the kids picking up on every curse word), insight (Ron\'s reaction to kissing Francoise, the perverse satisfaction of Snape getting away with no haircut) and suspense (are Snape\'s instincts that Hermione is in danger accurate?).
In case it isn\'t clear, I am so enjoying this. You\'ve even given me a desire to go back and read \"Heart of Darkness\" (which I loathed my first time through, so that\'s saying something!).
Looking forward to your future posts ~ this story and any others you may come up with.
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so looking forward to tomorrow\'s update, you have me completely hooked. I\'m so GLAD that Severus has decided to walk away. The tension buildeth.... Kait
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March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Run Severus Run. Freedom!!!
Ok Nicholas said there was a tiger in his dream... that could be anyone... i\'m thinking betewwn Ron and Fran
Ok Nicholas said there was a tiger in his dream... that could be anyone... i\'m thinking betewwn Ron and Fran
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicholas...obviously knows something.
Hmm.
Excellent chapter, as always,
Hmm.
Excellent chapter, as always,
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March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no! Ron\'s going to crack! wonderful update hun. i feel like there should be more, like it shouldnt stop there but the chapter just sortof....leaves me wanting more. cant stop now...please post the next chapter soon! hehe (you have me litterally on the edge of my seat) THANKS
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So really, anyone who knew the other people. ledoledore pretty much knew everyone.
Maybe Malfoy because he doesn\'t have a perfect life. AND he showed up at the funeral (of Harry). Weird? Yes.
Maybe a Weasley?
Dumbledore .... though. ....
Maybe Malfoy because he doesn\'t have a perfect life. AND he showed up at the funeral (of Harry). Weird? Yes.
Maybe a Weasley?
Dumbledore .... though. ....
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s some squib gone mad I tell you! A squib gone mad! Jealousy on the loose! Anger! Rage! And wizarding society is going to have to chato fto figure out how to comfort and deal with the squibs among them! Social revolution! Squib gone mad! Mwuahahaha!
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story that I hope everyone reads it even if it isn\'t their kind of thing. The fact that it is already a complete story makes it even better. I hate it when good stories don\'t ever get finished.
It is sad to find that severus is in a Mental Institution but him being there makes his chracter all the more unique. I really like it when Hermione and Severus have their talks. If they can get him out of the Institution soon I can\'t wait to see some of the old him, or maybe not.
I also like Nicholas, his character is great. As for his dream it could mean anything. Is he based on anyone? Sometimes good chracters are based on people in the authors life.
I think Ron and Fran
It is sad to find that severus is in a Mental Institution but him being there makes his chracter all the more unique. I really like it when Hermione and Severus have their talks. If they can get him out of the Institution soon I can\'t wait to see some of the old him, or maybe not.
I also like Nicholas, his character is great. As for his dream it could mean anything. Is he based on anyone? Sometimes good chracters are based on people in the authors life.
I think Ron and Fran
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March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t say how thrilled I am every time I see an update to this! I wish I had a bound copy in my hand (complete of course!) so that I could hide myself away and read. It really is superb.