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for Written in Blood

by Corinna

person Mary
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love way way you\'re doing the forced marriage concept. Keep writing!!
person GeekGoddess
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not familiar with the novels....but I love your story and am sad that I will miss the next chapter since I will be out of town (going to see Barenaked Ladies in concert), but I\'ll catch up when I get back.
person christy
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait for another update. I like this story different from others i have reSnapSnape needs happiness and a good wife.
person Derdroe
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You did not put the story on the site.
person Derdroe
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I ment chapter 8 sorry Opps
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastically well written! Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON!!!
person Areola
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have just finished reading chapter one, and just wanted to let you know how extremely enjoyable this story is. I have read several depictions of Snape\'s mother as cruel, sadistic witch (\"witch\" being the operative word, of course) but this is so far the best.

Your Selima is the cleverest written, funniend mnd most credible Mrs. Snape I had the chance to read so far. The wicked witcf thf the West, perhaps Hansel and Gretel\'s witch, perhaps Gregory Maguire\'s Elphaba) comes to life in the most vivid, convincing way.

\"Selima\" is a bit strange choice of a name. Is there any meaning behind it?
person Snapeaholic
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is in response to one of the above reviews by Aerola. Yes, some women can come by only stimulation of their nipples. It\'s not just a man\'s myth. *ROLLS EYES* Frankly, I am one of the women who can come by penetration alone. In fact, I find it very hard to come at all through clitoral stimulation. I have also been blessed enough to come through nipple stimulation alone, also.

Just because you are not blessed in that way, Aerola, does not mean all women aren\'t.

That being said - Apologies to all! I thought I would defend the dear author\'s sexual writings! Congrats on a great story, and I am definitely looking forward to seeing where it goes!
person Areola
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So there ARE women who come by penetration alone? Not to mention, super women who come througthinthing but nipple stimulation?? Well, now I know I\'ven ten thoroughly fucked up. *Still somewhat suspicious, but also green with jealousy*
person cd
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, didn\'t think the lemony goodness woulg come so soon, but i sure enjoyed it.
byr