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Guilt trip... She lays on the guilt trip. MUST be related to my mother... sigh. OK - So I\'ve been loving your story and not faithfully reviewing. That makes me a horrible person, oops reader. Please, please, pretty please with sugar on top forgive me?? I loved the killing Mrs Snape part. YAY!! YAHOO!! WHOOPEE!!! Maybe now Severus can call Hermione Mrs Snape without having horrible thoughts...
BTW - thanks for the 3 chapters. Can we have another please? (REALLY - PROMISE - I\'m just kidding. But I am definitely looking forward to reading more.)

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!

Very nice chapter. I like the way things are progressing. As for a name for the baby, I\"ve always liked Maximillian, Osiridessdessa, Veronica and Balthazar.

*sits on edge of seat* OOHHHHH!!!! what happens next????? I want to read more!!!! Please, Please,Please,Please,Please,Please,Please,Please,Please Updayte soon...!!!

Awesome chapter. I hope the old lady is dead. I hope Severus will be okay though. :(

HOLY CRAP THAT WOMAN IS NUTS. Or should I say WAS nuts LOL. I\'m glad she\'s gone, at least I hope she is. Christ what a nightmare. Although I would have loved to have seen Hermione put Mrs. Snape (the elder) er per place. Thanks for giving us so much to read, but I\'m greedy and want more.

YES!!!!! OH!!!! YAY!!! Oh..I mean...that must have been difficult to write, you know, the death of a charr...r...*giggling*. Oh, I enjoyed that. Imaginative use of a vortex, of sorts. Very well done.

Heather

This is becoming more and more interestin lik liked the interaction between Snape and Hermione\'s parents in the last chapters, and Snape\'s point of view was both amusing and very realistic. I expect it\'ll be fun to read his musings about life once their baby is born... It\'s a wee bit difficult to imagine our erstwhile potions master changing nappies and hushing a shrieking infant - but you\'ll surely have him do that as well :) Keep up the good work!

Just found this and its great. Quite a bit different than the other marraige challenge stories. I\'m looking forward to the next chapter. Snapes mother is a super bitch. I hope they can get her out of the way soon.

I love this story so far. (And of course I love your penname - I\'m a huge Mercedes Lackey fan). I just read the wedding and great job. Just what DID Lucius do, anyway? Were they just being paranoid? I\'m looking forward to your next update.