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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s nicely written, I\'ll give you that. Fluent speech and all. But I do not agree with the plotline and characterisation. Ron trying to RAPE Hermione?! Not even when he\'s drunk he\'d try that, I say. And Hermione should\'ve shown a bit more surprise/annoyance/anger when she found out about the engagement. And Lavender and Ginny ratting to Dumbledore about Hermione\'s \"affair\" wher her teacher? I scanned up to 5th chapter, and I will not go any further, sorry...
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July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was a really great story i must admit!I liked it a lot!It just kept getting better and better and for once Harry Potter wasn\'t the important one.It was like so sort of spin-off of a harry potter series...good thinking and bravo!It was great to see Draco as a decent for once.
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July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fanfic i have ever read. Most NC-17 rated fics makes sex sound disgusting and bad. but the way you wrote about it it explaned how buetiful and precious and right sex is. Even is no sex was in this fic the plot would have been beyond excellent the story itself is beautiful yo have created a piece of art and i congradulate you.
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July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
um, i\'m doing The Femina Liquidus Potion actually, and i\'m halfway thru chapter two, i wanna get two chapters ahead of myself before i put it out.. cause i know i\'ll probably be a while between chapters what with all my other stories, um, haven\'t had a chance tnishnish skin on skin yet, will when i have time, summer sesion is a pain for squeezing timepecapecally when disks break and whole 5 page reports are lost ;.;)
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June 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NO, NO, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You have to write Femininus Liquidus Potion next!!!!!!!!! PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You have to write Femininus Liquidus Potion next!!!!!!!!! PPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I have already reviewed you story(again, it\'s great!), but I just read your whole message on the intro-thingies. This is great for a first-time fic! Congrats!!! I hope you won\'t keep your tourtured fans waiting too long on the sequels! ;) Please!
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June 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve said before that this story was entrancing and breath-taking, but I never in a million years thought I would be unhappy to see the demise of Lucius Malfoy. Merlin help me, I actually cried when he died. It moved me! Ahh, waa...
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story! If you plan on writing any more stories maybe you should get a beta!!!!! It\'s just a suggestion!!! Keep writing. MAybe you should write about Ginny\'s revenge if she has one or maybe HErmione and Draco\'s Child. It\'d be cool to see what happens to Ron, LAvender, Harry and Ginny after the dark lord\'s death!!! It\'s so sad that Luisius dies just when he discovers his true self!!!!! Anyway!!! Good job.
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June 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is really scorching! Good job, Cupiditatis! The foreplay was fircely stimulating and kinky that I immediately went for a cold shower! I wish Draco could do those naughty things to me! LOL
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May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!!!!!! Great ending to the story. what is secrets of the past about again>? please email me and tell me as well as when you start writing the sequel to skin on skin, i need to read more of that. secrets of the past sounds good but i don\'t remember what it is. so email me and tell me what it is please and also when you start writing the sequel emme tme too... and very good job in writing this chapter and all the other chaptetheythey were great. Gilthoniel