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September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it, please do add more!
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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant Story. I really enjoyed the Ending of Chapter sixteen where Lucius Said he had Unfinished Biz with Snape. I really hope that Nothing Terrible Happens to Snape tho. Great job and Update soon
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I truly love this story. I started reading it a while back and lost track only through frustration in accessing the aff site. Then--all of a sudden it popped up on Ashwinder. It took me a whole day to find out where I saw it last because I knew there had to be more, seeing as how I remembered what came next. :) Didn't want to take away the suspense for all your readers there so I decided to review here instead. I am most certainly interested in seeing more. -TT
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August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow, that was certainly worth the wait! Great chapter. I'm so glad you were finally able to update this incredible story.
But I think I'm going to have to read some of the back chapters, I'm confused. Didn't Severus do a total Obliviate on Lucius? I hope he at least isn't the same Lucius he was before. Maybe it was more like a personality improvement.
But I think I'm going to have to read some of the back chapters, I'm confused. Didn't Severus do a total Obliviate on Lucius? I hope he at least isn't the same Lucius he was before. Maybe it was more like a personality improvement.
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER FIFTEEN: A DAY OF ANTICIPATION
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! That was very well written!! The tension and excitement between Severus and Hermione was tangible!! The anticipation is Killing me!!! Can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!
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July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved the McGonnagal Flitwick reaction. I\'m thinking that Lucius\' memory wipe out could be a very good thing. Maybe Dumbledore can turn him around. Please update soon. I can\'t wait for thest two to finally get it on.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CHAPTER FOURTEEN: IN THE WAKE... I do like the fact that you are leading in to their sharing each other & didn\'t just let them jump into things!!! I am looking forward to seeing just how good Severus makes her 1st experience!!! PLEAS email me when you post your next story!!! Til chapter 15, Deb >^..^<
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June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can\'t wait for more!! Lucius\' punishment was great ;) can\'t wait for Sevvie and Hemione to get it on!!!
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chatpter. I had a feeling Hermione would feel bad about Lucius at first but then realize it was the best punishment. I can\'t wait to read your next chapter. Please update soon.