rate_review Reviews

Just wanted to drop a line to let you know how much I'm enjoying this story. I've been reading it from the beginning and I love to see the twists and turns that you continue to put in with each new chapter. I wanted to encourage you to please continue with the story...for the avid readers (like me) who, unfortunately, forget to comment or review all the time. But I want you to know how much I like your writing style and characterizations. Keep up the good work.

I'm reading and enjoying! Please keep going!

I'M READING THIS STORY!!!!

HI,
I wanted to let you know I'm reading your fic. It's very good and I enjoy your plot. Was it Ron? I guess I'll have to wait and see if you update.

Keep up the good writting!

shall be upsett if you discontinue it. really really.

Hey, great chapter. I loved Draco's letters and can totally understand why he doesn't care. I'm sorry to hear that you want to stop writing it due to what seems to be little interest. I have to say I'm quite disappointed. I have read so many good stories that have never been finished use use the writer feels they aren't getting feedback. While I can understand how you feel I would think you are writing to express your creativity, not just to get reviews. Yes, reviews are nice. It lets you know people are reading your efforts and feeds the creative ego, but to stop writing because you aren't getting feedback is being unfair to those who still are interested in your story. Yes, I admit I'm being selfish but can you blame me? Here I've invested time (albeit not as much time as you have writing it) reading this story and then I find one day its been abandoned?

I have probably a good 100 or so stories in my computer, all of them wonderful, and at least half of them are stories that have been abandoned by the author. I have not deleted them in the miniscule hope that one day I will go to the site I found the story on and see an update. You also have to realize some people don't like to leave feedback, they just don't, I mean you can't make someone leave feedback even though they read the story.

Please for those of us who are reading this whether its two or two hundred, finish this. You write very well, and this is a wonderful story, if you already have an ending planned in you rhead then just end it. So maybe you planned on another 10 more chap the then write another two or three more and tie things up, but don't just give up on it.

This turned into a much longer little speech than I wanted, but you have to also understand the readers side of things too. Its hard to wait days and sometimes several weeks for an update to a story from some writers. If the story is good we wait and jump on every chapter we get. But then to find out one day after several weeks and maybe months of following a story that you had grown so fond of has just been left by the wayside, is just a complete let down.

CH 18 - I'm still reading, I'm still reading! I don't know about anybody else; perhaps the start of the new school year is tying up some folks. Not me. I like the chapter and the "letters" approach. I just hope it doesn't take long to catch (and kill) Lucius; ewww..... Are you going to tell us who Draco's boyfriend is? PLEASE FINISH THE STORY!!!!!

Please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please

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I'm loving your story!!!! That was a really good way for Severus to deal with Lucius. I can't wait to see what Lucius is up to.
Please post more soon :)

Hey, I liked chapters 17 and 18--they were good. I liked the tension that arose when they, the medical board, began to argue as to what to do with Lucius. I've seen similar situations before; a patient with full mental capacity who is able to care for themselves, but with no recolection of who they are is often the center of a huge medical debate in regards to who is responsible. You did a great job with that and it was interesting to see it played out. I also liked the letters going back and forth between Draco and the doctor--it was funny, but sad at the same time. Great job illuminating the dilemma of the child-abusive parent relationship.
who,who, you're a very good writer. You're just doing a fantastic job with this story and I hope to read more soon. ^_^

Ciao!