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for The Seduction Game

by Grill

person June
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 26 - EEKS!!! Severus came so close to getting Obliviated by Karkaroff; he should've had quicker reflexes. Severus should've been quietly using Legilimency to read Hermione's mind, but at least he found the piece of Lucius' robe. I just hope this isn't a trap to lure Severus into going to Lucius and getting zapped like Ginny did. You ARE going to take care of Ginny, aren't you? And you're going to update again soon? Please??
person Kati
schedule November 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm up to chap 4 now...and I have to say: interesting plotline, fine written! ;) Have to read on .....
person Kill Bill
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh...my...God; you must update. If you don't, I think I'm going to die here on the spot.
person June
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ch 24 - very nice! I'm glad she doesn't force him to tell her all the details about his past. But I am concerned that she's not taking the threat of Lucius seriously. I hope they figure out that "someone" must be helping Lucius; between them and Draco, they should be able to identify Karkaroff. At least, if the authoress is merciful?
person jeannette
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it can't wait for more
person eve/roarke
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am having a wonderful afternoon, why , because you updated, I really love this story and I find it facinating
having Lucius lurking in the background.

The shower scene was so hot and not just the water, jealous of Hermione? You bet!!!!!

update sooner rather than later.

five stars because its that good.
person Kill Bill
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I hope you keep tingting with Mr. Malfoy getting a littlt hoth Hth Hermione.
person jessica
schedule October 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great!love the malfoy portryal.more!
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a great story; I hop you update soon that is.
person Kill Bill
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was a great story; I hop you update soon that is.