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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Im down on my knees begging you not to let lucius get hold of hermione.
please she is to smart to fall for that no matter how seductive he can be.
please please please please please please....dont let them sleep together at least.
im begging you..
let ethier harry or snape stop it before it gets that far...please!!
please she is to smart to fall for that no matter how seductive he can be.
please please please please please please....dont let them sleep together at least.
im begging you..
let ethier harry or snape stop it before it gets that far...please!!
schedule
March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far please update!
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March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start looking forward to more!!
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue,i would love to see if lucius actually suceeds ingetting hermione.
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start! The story is well written, but no offense meant here, you really should get a beta to catch your spelling and grammar errors. Also, it would be so much easier to read if you would break up the chapters. Other than that, great work, and I look forward to seeing where it goes! :)
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just loved the first chapter! Could you please tell me whenever you update? :)
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Eagerly waiting for the continuation!
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start. And you\'ve combined two of my favorite combinations in one. Lucius/Hermione and Severus/Hermione are my favorites since they are always so wicked and wonderfully smutty. Please update soon.
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh, i can\'t wait for more. great start.
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March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Can\'t wait to see what happens in next chapter!