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April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm, i like that! I\'m not a big fan of LM/HG (though probably it\'s worth a try), but i\'m glad i have a bit variety from all those boring SS/HG stories, that are, at least mostly, the same. Would be glad, though, if it was Severus who gets the woman in the end.
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... I really wish Hermione would get her head out of her (_!_) & listen to what she is being told!!! When you have 3 people giving a warning, maybe there is something there that should be listened to!!! Looking forward to seeing if Severus talks to Hermione again & seeing if she will figure a few things out!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<
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April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, so far I think its 2 - 0 with Lucius ahead of the game. Severus isn\'t doing a very good job discouraging Hermione because I think he is being too vague. Hermione is the kind of woman who neto bto be told things straight up front and with out puches being pulled. Lucius is being sublte in his seduction and I think he is catching her off guard. Of course the fact our blond bon bon is so charming helps a lot too. Please update soon.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweeeeet.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know whether to feel sorry for Hermione or envious. I mean who wouldn\'t give their right arm to have Lucius seduce them. Unfortunately he\'s just using her. Then you have Severus, who is hell bent on protecting her so you figure he might have some feelings for her deep down inside, but he\'s so closed off emotionally he may never say anything.
I\'m glad you finally got your computer up and running. I hope this means more frequent updates.
I\'m glad you finally got your computer up and running. I hope this means more frequent updates.
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4... Severus had better get into gear & start running interference here or Lucius is going to become an even bigger problem!!! Hermione may resent Severus butting in, but better that than her getting hurt!!! Looking forward to more!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And the game begins! LOL I love it when Lucius and Severus both have feelings for Hermione (whether lustful or loving). I can\'t wait to see who will get between Hermione\'s legs first. Hehe. I like Severus, but Lucius is definitely the one I want to see shag Hermione senseless! *wickedly grins*
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March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting interesting indeed. I feel both sorry and envious of Hermione. Sorry because it seems Lucius is using her for his own fun, but envious because she is obviously wanted by these two men.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heehee! A very nice start here. I am a big fan of the Lucius/Severus/Hermione triangle, and am looking forward to seeing you develop this!
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1 & 2... Before I forget, in chapter 1 you have the date for the IMG as 2000 & then a little further on as 2004. Now, on to the review*