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for The Seduction Game

by Grill

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SO SORRY!!! I think all of those ANON\'s were my fault:( I fried my 1st computer yesterday & am temporarily working on one that is pre-dino with no pentium at all & Windows 95!!!

Chapter 7... Glad to see that Severus did take Lucius\' advice & was near by!!! I do hope that Hermione will see past Lucius\' B.S. & see that Severus has some feelings for her!!! Can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! Til chapter 8, Deb >^..^<
person crudedly
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
why did you stop here? *pout* this is screaming for an update!
person liquidscissors
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m enjoying the development of this story - I\'m adding it to my recs so that I don\'t miss your next chapter!
person ancientgirl
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, but yes, I am spoiled it was far too short for me. I have to say Lucius is such a nasty nasty man you just have to LOVE HIM!!! And I do love that Severus is there to save Hermione. I\'m wondering though what\'s going to happen next. Please update soon.
person Nordic Empress
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this, I really do!
person Triospleasure
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot but youv\'e made Herm just a little too stupid. Virgin yes ,stupid no. Your assuming that she would have never seen head games in a enviroment where she lived with hormonal students for 7 years.Not to mention she was a very bright student and foe of Voldy. I think she could easly see a plot directed at her.




Then again I might be thinking too much....

Trio


person Lyndie578
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Lucius is going to step in it! He is a right sexy bastard, but he doesn\'t deserve Hermione. Besides, she\'s not really that vulnerable is she?
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... I do hope that Hermione will start listening to her inner voice as well as the others that are telling her to be cautious where Lucius is concerned!!! I hope that Severus steps up at the ball, she might be more receptive after that dream!!! Looking forward to chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
person crudedly
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmm, you have me confused here. I mean, if Lucius is \'acting\' (snort) bad again, won\'t that keep Hermione away from him, now? would almost be too easy for sev then. :)
person Miki
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update. This storyline is very interesting. I neeeed moooore.

Thank you!