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Nice chapter. I like the conversation between them before the kiss. She tries to explain the last kiss away but can\'t. They seem to have gotten very close maybe a bit quickly here. Hermione says \'we\' haven\'t a chance\' I picture her more of saying \'there\'shinghing \'I\' can do\' and then Snape telling her how to keep safe....good job.

Chapter 10... I do hope that Hermione will be able to stay clear of Lucius during the rest of the confrence!!! If she stays around Severus, Lucius really shouldn\'t be much of a problem!!!

I wasn\'t sure where you were going with Hermione\'s line of questioning about the kiss!!! I had started to think that she was going to tell him that it was a mistake, but I\'m glad that they got that all cleared up in the end!!!

Looking forward to seeing what else Lucius will try as well as hoping that we will be seeing the relationship between Severus & Hermione grow!!! Til chapter 11, Deb >^..^<

I\'ve really enjoyed your story so far. I\'m on chapter 9 and posting while I have time. Love Snape and Lucius and you do them both very well. The tongue question was great and I\'m gland Hermione and Snape conversed on it for a while before he kissed her. The note from Malfoy was a nice touch too, completely unexpected. Good job.

I have been keeping up with this story since the first though I have not always not always commented. It is a wonderful tale that I hope to enjoy for a while yet. Please continue to write. OK? Thanks!

How can you leave us like that?!
You better update soon....I mean it.

Yay! Angst and implied future smut! Update soon!

Chapter 9... Severus earned some major brownie points in this chapter!!! Not only did he allow her to take the lead, but he took her to her roomroom & didn\'t take advantage... she had better pick him!!!

The note from Lucius sounds a bit troubling & I hope that Hermione will show it to Severus!!! What is it that Lucius feels that she \'OWES\' him?!? Why does he think that \"OW\"OWES\' him anything?!?

Looking forward to finding out what happens next!!! Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<

Wow, I just read all 9 chapters and I love your story! It\'s so wonderful, and the characters so real, please update soon, I would love to read more :)

tsk, bad lucius! The kiss was nice, although it\'s unbelievable how long Severus needed to kiss her! :)

Oh dear this is getting very competitive isn\'t it. How did that note from Lucius get into her room? And how can Lucius possibly think she will even look at him now, although I think looking the way he does will have something to do with it. I love the kiss form Severus. I can\'t wait to see where this is going. Please update soon.