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I can\'t wait to read more, I wanna see SS and LM have a heated interaction, and I wanna see some more SS/HG interaction, I just want so much but your the author and the one who has to make it happen, so I will wait in anxious anticipation for your next update which I do hope you will bring forth quickly. XOXO

Oh, this is the third time I try to post this review. AdultFanFiction.Netays ays makes my life difficult. Anyway. I just read all 11 chapters of your story. Great job, really! Lucius and Severus are so much in character. I hope Lucius won\'t rape poor Hermione, and Severus will arrive in time once again to save her. Hermione being analytical is so much like her! I mean, you know, asking Severus all those questions about their kisses and wanting to find reasons behind things and all that. I don\'t think I could have Snape\'s patience if I were him, lol! I like it that you make him so composed and somewhat impassive, except when things get a little bit too hot, that is! But even then he can still control himself, of course! I noticed that you finish each chapter with an evil cliff-hanger, so please update SOON! n\'tn\'t wait to see what happens in the next chapter, what with Lucius lurking in Hermione\'s room!

Well did we really think Lucius would give up? I love the way Hermione played him and made him believe she wanted what he was offering. It was really the only way to get out of there. Please don\'t keep us waiting too long for another chapter. I can\'t wait to see what Severus does to his old friend.

Chapter 12... It was nice to se that you had Hermione use her head & not just fall prey to Lucius!!! I can\'t wait to see what Sevrus will do to him!!! Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<

That was brilliant! I loved your twists. Keep it up!

Great story. Creepy Lucius, lushish Severus, niaive Hermione. Great combo. More soon please.

omg this is the maddest stori on earth!! wuht r u waiting for?!! RITE!! RITE RITE!! im waiting!!! impatientli i may add!!! come on!!!!!!!!!! pleaaaaaaaaase!~!!! i wanna noe wuht happens!!!!!!!!!!!11

Oh man this is getting interesting. The only thing against Severus here is the fact he\'s not being totally honest with Hermione. She will probably ultimately find out about Lucius\' bet, and even though Severus isn\'t playing his game that\'s how its going to look. I see some stormy times coming, but I\'ve got an umbrella so I can\'t wait for more.

Please don\'t let Lucius rape her!! Keep the chappies coming.

Chapter 11... I like the pace that you are taking with Severus & Hermione & I think that if they were to work their way into bed withing the next couple of chapters it wouldn\'t seem rushed!!! I like the fact that Severus is being as open with her as he is & is allowing her the lead!!!

I am hoping that Lucius won\'t have the opportunity to hurt her!!! Had he not been so nasty with her in the 1st place he would have been able to get what he wants, but he went about it from the wrong angle!!! I hope that Severus will be able to figure out what he is doing before it is too late!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter & to the promised \'real action between Hermione and Severus\'!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<