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Keep up the good work. OH. UPDATE ALREADY.

Hey, I think you are doing a really good job so far. I agree a little with Ginny, but I think it makes your stories yours. Besides allot of people do it. It lets you visualize whats happening. Keep up the good work. Oh and one more thing don\'t make it so long. Try not to pass ten chapters most people don\'t like long stories.

It\'s a pretty good start, but you should look it over and keep an eye out for spelling and grammatical errors.