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July 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't read your other reviews, but in the chapter about the photos, it should be "compromising" ones--that means they've done something to compromise themselves. Uncompromising is like being escorted somewhere--no trouble at all, no slander, no rumors, no gossip. Sorry, I've read alot of crap historical romances where the beautiful young victim is compromised by a heartless bastard so I'm keen on that word. So far, like your story, very few grammar or tense mistakes. And it's not so hard to follow if you just read it through. Good job!
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November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch 1-6: I guess I must be a little strange but I'm not having any problems following your story. It seems crystal clear to me. I'm thinking I may not like Lucius in a few minutes when I read chapter 7 but right now, I'm not having a problem at all. Your writng in this story reminds me of drabbles that are short and concise and only give you the essential information. I like it a lot.
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yup, I don't like Lucius in this story. I wonder how you'll manipulate these poor characters next.
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far..Only a few errors but i like the story...I just wish the chapters were longer..they r so short
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WO! i love it! really good job!!! ^-^
can\'t wait to read the rest
can\'t wait to read the rest
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October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I really like the story, just a few bits of advice... You can make your chapters a little longer by adding the flashbacks together. When you write the titles of your chapters, have a little confidence in yourself. If you make your chapter have negative connotations people arent going to want to read them. other than that i really enjoyed it and hope to read more from you... feel free to email me.
Angel #4
Angel #4
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a good story, was a bit confusing, but now...i see where its going- i think, well update soon
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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi again, your story is definatly turning into something wonderful, I love all that is going on with the characters, definatly a good story. However, Chap 10 and 11 are the same chapter and they also have nothing to do with HP. The new chapters are all LOTR characters, I really hope this is just a mistake on your part, if not I am beyond confused. But if it was a mistake, just wanted to let you know about it. Anyway, aside from the last two chapters, I really like this story and can\'t wait for more. Keep up the great work.