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for Turning Around

by bluehearts

person Draeconin
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Despite grammar problems, this is a story worth sharing with others. I\'ve added this tale to my \'Recommended Stories\' list.
person Cherish(BlackElf)
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww.. how sweet! *Runs off to read next chapter*
person Keikokin
schedule April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uh oh I see trouble with Ron. post soon...like Hot Harry tho\'
person Midnight Fairy
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god!!
this is such a good story
i really hope you update
i\'m gonna have to keep checking t see if you do
person CoryJ
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*plans all the bad things she could do to Hermione, Dean and Seamus* good story UPDATE!!!
person dedmun
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, i like this story. it\'s nice and i\'ve never read one like it. think you\'re doing a great job. is this it or is there going to be more? the ending makes me think yes, but...
person blah
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like the story but i think that just becuz they live in the wizarding world doesnt mean they live on another planet i think draco would know what and where paris was seeing as theythey live in europe!!! and they do where actual clothes under their robes!!! yes i do know that this is a story and i may be over reacting but in case you didnt notice those things i just wanted to point them out. but i do like the story that just kinda pissed me off srry for sorta flaming.
person Keikokin
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice chapter. Whats up with Pansy and Hermione? Why not pair them off? I am sorry to hear about the bad fic u read. Care to email me and warn me with the title of the piece? I\'ve never \'seen\' you so upset. So here you go quickie fluff: The darkness was all around as Draco walked through the Quidditch Pitch grounds, entered the castle and walked down towards his Dorm Room. Crossing his mind constantly were random thoughts of kissing, cuddling and shagging for he was horny.
He had been shocked earlier when Pansy had told him she often dreamed about Dumbledore involved in a blow job with Voldemort, but each to their own, she didn\'t know about his fantasies involving his Harry. One day he would discuss his feelings with Harry, but not yet, he still hardly believed how aroused held bld be by just thinking of Harry while masturng hng himself off in the showers, or at night in his four-poster bed. The night air was fresh as he walked the next night. He sat down in a quiet location by the lake and began to stroke the erection he was sporting again. Would Harry\'s mouth feel like that to his cock? What would Harry think of him if he knew how his cock grew hard as he thought of licking whipped cream off Harry\'s beautiful ass? Draco rubbed the now fully erect member while rubbing his chest whispering Harry\'s name to himself. He he shoushould stop and wait until he got back to his Dorm Room but desire overtook him and he came, screaming Harry\'s name into the night. Meanwhile, Harry had not been able to sleep and had decided to go out for a walk in the night air. The Quidditch Piwas was such a beautiful place at this time of the night. He walked thinking of Draco Malfoy. He sighed happily thinking of how they no longer fought. He had loved the Slytherin secretly for ages.
He jumped in alarm as he heard a voice in the distance. Was that Draco calling his name? He must be in trouble to shout for him with such desperation. He ran towards thend ond of Draco
person Legolas
schedule March 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey i love this story it is coming along really well. I hope you write more on it. I cant wait till its finished so i can read it. If you don\'t mind whenever you get another chapter up let me know so i can read more to it.

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I hope you keep up the good writings

Peace
person nova
schedule March 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oo, such a lovely fic, like it very very much... and it ends in the worst (well, almost) part! More!^^