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for Beauty

by SStar

person Mira
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow never been a big fan of character death and angst, but this is one of those that work out so well. Nice job! Very chilling tho...
person maureen
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. That was...i loved the way it was told with the running long sentences and the brilliant imagery. I love how Harry was Draco\'s obsession, all comsuming. I loved the brutal loving violence, how Harry\'s skin remains perfect yet his is sliced and scarred. Your word choice was amazing. The ending was awesome because the violence was expected, the tenderness was unexpected, and the death was unexpected. It was really good, I hope you keep writing.
person PW
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its scary when you know people who need pain like that, but it doesn\'t stop the story from being beautiful.
person .
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say for this is...wierd. Im confused and im sure that this makes little to no scence. I read it twice trying to pick up on what I missed. There is no plot to this \'story\' Im not quite fond of it.
person Hart
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god that was AWESOME o.O

...

Whoa.

I\'ve got someone from another fandom that I\'d love to have you meet ;) You two are the embodiment of evilness.
person thrnbrooke
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was intense! Harry kills him in the end. I\'m speechless!
person Jade
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
incredible. I love it. *bows*
person rome
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was hot. really hot. i like dark fics, but they usually have somewhat happy endings, which kind of ruins it. your ending was perfect.
person bekki
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
maybe its just the mood im in but that fic really freaked me out..... the last bit about hacking at his dark mark killing him then fucking him, that just wigged me out beyond belief.... good job! ^.^
person typied
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, this is good.