rate_review Reviews

I just finished reading my way through BLOoDL, and I must say that it is quite well written.

I found the story gripping enough that I read straight through, and was quite upset to know that it isn\'t done yet.

Please, keep up the good work and, if possible, let me know when the next chapter gets posted.

Vir Vir

nooooooo... dumbledore ... darn.. never know how much you rely on exclamation points to review until your keyboard refuses to give them to you.. .anyway, i;m screaming here, biting my nails, and praying that you update asap - exclamation point x 10/
caliko

The Albus/Severus goodbye scene was sheer brilliance. I hope you don\'t mind, but I used part of it in a post at L&LS because it struck me, and indeed, put into words my feelings about my search for forgiveness as well. It\'s going to stick with me for a long time. I am just floored at how beautifully written it was.

I hope too many people don\'t get upset by Hermione\'s desire to make love in the middle of everything. As a married woman, I can honestly say that at moments like that, yes, it helps.

Heather

I\'ve been reading this fic since it was first put up, although this is my first time reviewing. First, it is masterfully written. The imagery is superb. As I read the most recent chapter (24), I loved the parere ere Aubrey uses the line from The Princess Bride. One of the best movies ever! :) Poor Dumbledore though! :(

Surely it should be HERMIONE, not DUMBLEDORE, who has the right to absolve Severus for his evil acts in the past? I\'m completely unimpressed and I wish I\'d stopped reading this ages ago. I only pursued it because someone recced it to me. It\'s clear that they, and you, are insane misogynists.

Chapter 24 was the vilest, most offensive text I have ever read. I was enjoying this story but it has now become nothing more than a platform for you to spout your religious, social and political beliefs. I truly hope you are recieving therapy as this story can only be the product of a deeply disturbed mind.

Chapter 23 - The Trial by Existence... This chapter has some very emotional stuff in it!!! What they have done to Aubrey is so very cruel & it brings tears because as a mother I would want those who hurt my child to pay!!! Severus has so many internal battles that he fights & now with what has happened to his daughter, another has been added not to mention another child yet to be born!!! The end just hit me so strongly, Ginny trying to comfort the child that has been put through so much, not really knowing if what she has told her is true, but trying to be convincing & hopeful!!!

I am very much looking forward to the battle, to see what will happen to the very diverse group of fighters as well as to see if they will find Ginny & Aubrey!!! Til chapter 24, Deb >^..^<

I missed the direction in which you\'re now taking this story. I can\'t help but feel that Aubrey
was only taken for the purpose of a shock to the readers *And quite brutally so*, and the purpose
left me feeling cold. Especially the way that Severus and Hermione are dealing with losing their only child.
Why are they having sex so much and haven\'t tried looking for her? At all? It leaves me with the sense they could
care less at what happens to her. Now they have the new child on the way, and having sex again, that they\'re
not going to try and find their only child, any time soon.

I can\'t help but feel that you\'ve only decided to rip-off war telling now, because you have no idea what e to to do with the direction of the story to make it continue.

It\'s a cheap thing to do.

WOW. Just wow.

\"Only because of greegree in counseling social work and being a licensed psychotherapist\"

My Goodness, please tell me that someone with such a degree as yours surely doesn\'t treat patients as such. Cruelity and Rudeness should be above someone of your intelligence. If you don\'t like it, don\'t read it. Don\'t bother reviewing because whereas not everyone has to like the story, no one has to be rude to someone writing it.

And for the other person about the child be taken and their reaction.. That could be real. I know someone who\'s child was kidnapped and their greif was so strong that they stuck to the only real thing they could feel. sex. Yes, she ended up pregnant again within 4 months of her child\'s disappearance. One month before the child was born, the body turned up. it was a horrible, devistating thing and i feel for her with all my heart. She named her new girl the exact name as the first.

keep writing. its beautiful