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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You leave me wanting more. I hope you update soon! Maybe you could make the chapters a little longer? You can\'t blame me for asking...I REALLY want to know what happens next, and I feel a little sad that it ends where it does. (I know I know...patience is a virtue. But when you find something you like, it\'s really hard to be patient! It\'s like waiting in line for a ride at Six Flags Magic Mountain. Or Disneyland. Or Knotts Berry Farm. I think Magic Mountain is the best, though.)
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i stumbled into this and found myself rather
hooked after the prologue. it looks as if it will
be a very good read. i will be waiting anxiously
for more.
~blessings~
ldf
hooked after the prologue. it looks as if it will
be a very good read. i will be waiting anxiously
for more.
~blessings~
ldf
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not so sure about this story. It\'s most definitely different from what I\'ve been reading in this fandom thus far. You write nicely, though, and I have a feeling I\'m going to like this one...
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your summary sounds interesting, but........ The only things that showed up are the disclaimer, words of thanks & the word Prologue!!! I hope this was just a loading problem!!! :(
Deb >^..^<
Deb >^..^<
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:-) The first (real) reply. I feel like a god coz i know what is going to happen in the next chapters ;-)
I person tho thought that Hermy was acually dead, you didn\'t give any clue that would show as she\'s not REALLY dead.
other than that... perfect!
*Jessy the black pegasus*
I person tho thought that Hermy was acually dead, you didn\'t give any clue that would show as she\'s not REALLY dead.
other than that... perfect!
*Jessy the black pegasus*
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Prologue... I just got a chance to read the prologue of your story & I apingping that you will be adding more very soon!!! This is so sad so far!!! I can understand her wanting to leave and am curious to find ohat hat it is that will be drawing her back!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is sad. But, it is very interesting. I\'d like to read more to find out how it all happened and what happened to Hermione after she left. You\'re off to a good start witis ois one.
Ciao!
Ciao!
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay...trying this again. My first review is floatingoutthe the www galaxy. For some reason, this site is having problems loading today, so when I tried to send the first review, i got that error screen. Bummer. Anyways, I really hope that you can update soon. (Is now too soon for you??) I\'m really intrigued. I wnat to know what happens, and where she went, when and why she comes back...oh I want to know it all! Great beginning!
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March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so good. Wonderful start. I love the way you painted a picture of Hermione and that\'s how we found out she was raped. You left us wanting more without it being a cliff hanger. That\'s really hard to do. I can\'t wait to see more.
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February 18, 1920 at 12:00 AM
I am sucked into your story. You have made my list of top ten writers who can write an excellent Snape. I love Aubrey too. She is most definatly no Mary Sue. I can\'t wait for Snape to hear that Hermione will be taking over his lower Potions classes. That should be interesting.