rate_review Reviews

Just to clarify that last comment, your writing is beautiful and you are weaving an amazing story -- the subject matter and emotions make it difficult to call the story \"beautiful;\" it\'s moving, deep and wonderfully evocative. Beautiful dar dark way might be the better way to say it.

Geez, that was rough. At least he knows now. Hermione was very brave and unbelievably controlled in telling him. Her strength was admirable. I look forward to Aubrey\'s take on this. She won\'t take his garbage and I look forward to it.

Cheers.

WOW. Well, you certainly surprised ME.

DAMN. nwarnwards ...

Goodness gracious. I can\'t wait for more, and hope you\'re going to finish it and not keep us in angst for long between chapters!!!!!

I love the rottweiler comment. ;)

~ R

This story is really interesting, I like the whole idea, but have difficult picturing a forgiving Hermione. Once I new a woman who recived a gunshot, she says she needs to forgive. Forgiveness is an act of will, after all but working with the rapier? Well, I\'m waiting to see what would you do with all this. Good fic!

Part 4, Chapter 3... I am very taken by this story!!! Not only is it well written, but it keeps the readers attention!!! I do like how you are writing the characters, fitting the situation!!!

I am glad to see that Hermione will be working with Severus, but something tells me that he won\'t be too thrilled!!! I am very much looking forward to seeing how he reacts to finding out that she will be taking over some of his classes!!! I\'m even more interested in seeing what he does when he findt het he has a daughter & remembering the situation that created her!!!

Til chapter 4, Deb >^..^<

I wonder, will Severus launch into a furious tirade when he learns he\'s Aubrey\'s father? He\'d get a scolding from Aubrey for sure, if he did that...hehe. Sorry, my mind is wandering. I meant to start off by saying \'wonderful chapter\' and \'I hope to see more updates soon\'. Ciao.

interesting four chapters, rape is such a horrible thing and concieving and keeping the child seem a little implausible yet honourable. you have my attention. thanks.

Write! You must write more! Stop reading this at once and write! This is brilliant story. I can hardly wait to see where it goes

This is terribly, terribly beautiful, and I think I may just be addicted.
I am still astonished that English is not your mother tongue! As for
hair colour, both mine and the father of my children\'s hair are very
dark brown, and we produced one white-blonde and one redhead.
Odd, how genetics move. I\'rsonrsonally enchanted that you have
not given Hermione\'s and Snape\'s daughter the usual cinnamon or
black hair. It works perfectly - an image of something pure
coming from such a dark beginning. Many thanks for posting this
amazing work on this site.

Blessings, Kait x