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Chapter 6 - poetic and sad, thanks.

I adore this story, absoluty like the literature references too.
You can easily feel Snape\'s and Hermione\'s doubts and fears..., Will Snape be so strong to go out of his pride and learn to forgive himself and take his daughter\'s love, and maybe Hermione\'s too?, And for now: Would he being able to let Hermione work by his side?...I\'m burning to know this....What can I On Only that I\'m looking for a new chap each time I\'m going on my PC. Right now I\'m so happy because there\'s number 6!!!

I\'m trying very hard to imagine Aubrey\'s reaction to her father. Something like \'At least I don\'t have his nose\' or something. Love the story, write more soon.
- Damia -

Wow.. and I mean Wow... what a powerful and wonderful story. I can\'t believe how well written this is and how you have even managed to put it in a time frame that most people will at least understand.

Please do write more.

LINIS

One thing fanfic author has difficult in handle well are memories, they tend to screw it up using flashback (shuders). This chapter is a must read for authors who actually want to writte an escene in wich past is remeber.

I thought the poem was a great addition to the chapter...it makes me want to look into more works by Charles Bukowski. I wonder if Snape will be taking a part in his daughteive.ive. And after Aubrey is told about him, I wonder if he\'ll even have a choice. :) Looking frd trd to reading more!

You have turned out my soul inside out... it\'s bleeding and crying.
The chapter is really very good, so tense and dark. My applause and hoping for more ...

Chapter 5... Another AMAZING chapter, full of information!!! A lot of interesting information on Severus\' past, his family & what he did to Hermione!!!

I really like how you wrote the conversation between Severus & Hermione!!! I am glad to hear that he remembers & does feel guilt (even if he won\'t let her see it)!!! I think she is probably one of the few people that is capable of knocking him down a peg or 2 with reality!!! If he didn\'t feel any real remorse he wouldn\'t have felt the need to throw up after she left!!!

I am looking forward to seeing how much Aubrey will have an affect on Severus & just how long it will take him to see just what CAN be!!! Til chapter 6, Deb >^..^<

Intense and sad. thanks.

Wow. I\'ve ben waiting patiently for Snape\'s reaction, and you surely didn\'t disappoint! I\'m glad to see that he reacted very \'Snapeish\'. I hate it when other stories have him giving in, or getting all soft. Even if he reacts differently by himself or around the other professors, I\'m glad that he was Snape with Hermione. Even if deep down inside, I don\'t like his bad attitude. I still think it was the way he should react. Now I can\'t wait for the \'introductions\'!! I REALLY am looking forward to Aubrey\'s reaction! heeheehee.