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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When I called up this chapter, and read the title, \' Daddy\', I internally \'awwwwwed\'. THEN, I read the first chapter! *L*
This is a fantastic story. This chapter alone has brought out so much of Snape\'s personality! I love that you updated relatively often, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
I enjoy that Snape can actually HAVE another relationship ( albeit, purely sexual) with someone OTHER than Hermione. I love that when you wrote about him opening his gifts, the one from Aubrey and Hermione was mentioned as a passing by, and not completely the focus of the entire gift opening. AND, I love that he is Snape, as snarky as ever!
Excellent, excellent chapter!
This is a fantastic story. This chapter alone has brought out so much of Snape\'s personality! I love that you updated relatively often, and I eagerly await the next chapter.
I enjoy that Snape can actually HAVE another relationship ( albeit, purely sexual) with someone OTHER than Hermione. I love that when you wrote about him opening his gifts, the one from Aubrey and Hermione was mentioned as a passing by, and not completely the focus of the entire gift opening. AND, I love that he is Snape, as snarky as ever!
Excellent, excellent chapter!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really and excellant story, I hope to read more of it soon.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved these chapters. I haven\'t had the time lately to read a lot, but now I have...so thanks for the update, and keep writing please!!
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a marvelous story this is! Dark and sweet all at the same time, just like the very best chocolate. I am looking forward to more.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10 - nice Christmas, is Severus going soft? thanks.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really like the little prince reference. cute indeed. its a good story. really good. i like it very much. please update soon.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous story. I love all the literary references, they keep me on my toes. You\'ve desperately made me want to read this Paul Celan, I love the excerpts! I have one real qualm - according to the laws of meiosis, Aubrey should have black hair. But then I\'m torn between that and the fact that she is such an exceptionally magical child, and no one really seems to be certain about what that entails! Anyway, please continue, I haven\'t read something as intriguing as this on AFF.net for a while
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~ Jenna.
By the way, does each chapter title have particular connotations? Perhaps a riddle? I was curious, because it had seemed that you had been extremely fastidious on that point.
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~ Jenna.
By the way, does each chapter title have particular connotations? Perhaps a riddle? I was curious, because it had seemed that you had been extremely fastidious on that point.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Continuing to enjoy this story. One question, though -- when did Hermione tell Harry, Ginny, Ron et al. that she was back? They obviously know, since they\'re sending Christmas presents, but I couldn\'t figure out when the actual notifying happened.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 - wow, my own response in A/N. I feel so honored. I do have a gifted child, I don\'t have I.Q points, but he is in the 99.8%ile. Your Aubrey(sp) is a lovely character and enjoyable. thanks for the update.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9... I like how you are showing the interaction between these 3!!! Hermione shows that she is a mother, very protective of her daughter!!! Looking forward to more, Deb >^..^<