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Thanks for finishing this, but you should be aware of something. Awhile back this site was corrupted, and it showed itself by blending words together. Your story has these little errors all through it, and you might want to fix them. Reading it from the beginning, only the last few chapters didn't have them.

Thanks for writing this, and I hope you write more.

Beautifully and evocatively written! Thank you.

Well...I think you use the words 'lemony', 'lactic' and 'milky' too often. Aside from that...this was a masterfully and brilliantly written story. Your subtle and witty manipulation of the English language, at some times, left me breathless. Perhaps a little over-blown or contrived once or twice, but mostly supurb. Your 'Plato' technique of providing both sides of an argument had me involved and enthralled. Your insight into philosophy, psychology and theology was intriguing and thought provoking. I didn't read your A/N's often...it took me away from the story...but I got the impression that some people didn't like where you were going on certain thigs. I, personally, thought you gave a well-rounded and knowldegable over-sight into may belief systems and treated them all with dignity and respect. I have been a voyeur on this site, but this story forced me to tell you how much I enjoyed it. Thank you.

It's rare to find a truly moving story revolving around Snape and Granger that is true to form, believable and *breathtaking*, but somehow, you've not only managed to weave such a tale, but surpassed any and all conceivable expectations.

This story was deep, gut-wrenching at times, beautiful, sad, horrific and sweet. It made me both love and hate some characters, their actions, their thoughts or words. It made me *think*. I also identify with the view of Voldemort and the Death Eaters in correlation with Hitler (Y'mach sh'mo v'zichro l'ad) and his Nazi thugs. The Holocaust is a painful subject to a great many people. Thankfully, none of our known family was affected, but my grandparents and their immediate families were safely in America long before WW2. Regardless, it still hurts. And while I know that Voldemort and the DE's being likened to the Nazis is not a new concept, you spun it so that it stood out - brilliantly portrayed.

You must have researched greatly, or at the very least thought long, deeply and hard about the subject matter, and it shows. You braved many complex issues, dissecting and sorting through the layers in each personality, dealing with feelings and emotions behind and as a by-product of acts committed, working through guilt, shame, pain and the steps towards redemption and acceptance and forgiveness - of self and of others. The end result of what I'm sure was a lot of hard work: you created a truly masterful piece.

I don't imagine you wrote just to write, as some authors tend to do, and you certainly didn't make light of heavy matters. This story shows passion for a subject that so many of us find difficult and yet others often dismiss, sadly. It was a pleasure (though at times painful) to see you meet such challenging material head-on, and pull it off almost flawlessly. [Almost only in regards to some minor spelling errors that irked me a bit - but then, I'm in beta-mode today, so it's to be expected!]

Your story was told boldly, beautifully and was all at once enlightening, educational and captivating. It had a wonderful balance; none too soft nor too harsh. Just what I think was realistic and thought provoking - something I value greatly in my reading material.

And not only did I find this piece phenomenal, but many of your Author's Notes were expansive, didactic and stimulating. I can only commend you and say that you're an inspiration - if only I could achieve half of the same ends with one of my own stories someday, I'd be satisfied.

Thank you for sharing your creativity, intelligence and knowledge and bringing the story to life in a way that makes me certain I'll not forget this story for a long time to come.

Best of luck in the future,
Shay

I LOVE this story, which I didnt think I would, but gave it a chance anyway.

But thats beside the point. I just wanted to let you know that Im going to borrow a quote from your story for my livejournal. I collect quotes, and this one is just amazing! I hope you dont mind.

http://charlotte_lee.livejournal.com in "Quotes I currently love"

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

I found your story to be very intelligent, heartfelt, and eloquent. I believe all who are broken, or who ever have been broken (or tried to redeem someone who was), can identify with the redemption aspect of this work. The severed finger, although it may have been considered by some to be harsh, brought to mind the J. Paul Getty kidnapping of the 70's, in which I believe, and ear was cut and sent to the boys parents. The reference served to aptly demonstrate the horrors of war and the monsters that thrive in such an environment. It was a well written story, and I understood the comparison between Hilter and Voldomort. The references to the literature that I was unfamiliar with inspires me to make a visit in the near future to my local library. And lastly, I firmly believe in God, and derive great comfort from that belief. And forgiveness and compassion isn't a bad way to live no matter what your reason. I didn't just read this story, I experienced it. And I know that this is not the last time I will read it.

:) I really enjoyed this story and the way its so very different and at the same time so very firmilar of the Snape we know. I did love the idea of Snape being a Jew during Nazi Germany if in a disturbing sort of way. Anyway great story, that was the point of my writing this review ;).

Nicole

A very well-written story and I can understand Hermione\'s reaction to the past. Ignore the flamers, I found your story believable and I enjoyed reading it.

Thankyou so much for this magnificent piece of writing. I have been inccredibly moved by your emotional writing and the very real characters that you have drawn.

This piece really spoke to me, I hope many others read it and get as much as I have from it.

It rates as at least a 6 tissue read *grin*.

Thankyou again for writing this and i hope you continue to use your talent.

Cheers