rate_review Reviews

I am enjoying your story greatly. It\'s a very literary, bitter and golden story. Nice change to read something very well-wen aen aimed NOT at the reader\'s gonads, but above the belt for a change. IF this is your first, please don\'t let it be the last. ARe you a professional writer? If not, you should be. Very impressive.

the story is good and the pace if fine. keep doing what you\'re doing. I\'ll keep reviewing and at least two of us will be happy. thanks for the update.

*throws things at the door the author disappeared behind* Hey!!!

*Does a happy dance*

Loved the chapter, this has been my manic-depressive post for the day, ciao.

I don\'t think I\'ve reviewed this before, but i must tell you I find it to be fascinating and extreamly well-written and I can hardly wait for the next chapter!

Chapter 16... I do like the way that they seemed to begin to feel a bit more comfortable together, even if it was only for a brief time!!! I also likat Hat Hermione is finding out just how to deal with this mess of a man!!! I am very much looking forward to their dinner as well as seeing just how long it takes her to get him to open up a bit & really let her in!!!

I am glad to hear that you have this story completed!!! I like that you are posting a chapter or two at a time, but will be more than happy to read more if you choose to post more!!! Til your next update, Deb >^..^<

Well, although I do enjoy each and every chapter of this magnificent work of art, I would hope that you try not to hurry too much. To rush something as great as this, probably would not ruin it, but lessen the quality. At least thats how I feel when I am writing and people beg me to rush so I do and my work isn\'t as good as some of the first few chapters. ^_^ Then again! I am completely psyched about your story and I am waiting patiently but anxiously all nce nce for the next chapter!

absolutely fantastic!!! It\'s amazing that you can update so much, so soon!! Please kupdaupdating!!!

Never have I read something so good o.O and I have read a lot mind you! Please continue with your masterpiece I am really enjoying it and plan on reccommending it to all my friends!

Hermione\'s a bit of lightweight, hm?

That was a loverly chapter, I like that they are now talking to each other, but there is always the prospect of one of them going off like a loose cannon at any moment. Looking forward to more, so on, so forth.

Wonderful chapter! I cannot eve eve all the little(and not so little) confessions the two of thee mae making. I knew a better Severus would begin to emerge, but the path you have chosen is, if not lovely, remarkable. I think we are seeing a man and a woman who thought that they knew themselves and realise how very little they know. If I am wrong, you can cyber-smack me. LOL. In any case, thank you for a great story. :-)