rate_review Reviews

This story is absolutely fabulous. The character development is superb. I would place this story in the same category as Cloak of Courage and Falling Further In, maybe better. You make the characters utterly believable and therefore lovable in their own way. And for all of us, out there, who do not measure up to the media standard of model beauty, I adore how this Hermione is beautiful and warm and real and not 90 lbs. It also warmed my heart to read that line in chapter 19 where Snape thinks of Aubrey as HIS bright, beautiful daughter. I got the impression that he wasn\'t even aware of making the claim. Thanks for the great read. Mel V.

I read your authors notey thing at the begining and i must say i am glad you are gong to continue posting despite what toehrs said about \"sane people\" and such. This is an EXCELLENT fic. It is different then most fics i\'ve read, and im not sure if its just your style of writing or whatever, but there is some sort of addictive drug hidden within your words. Its not a very happy story, but not dark in the typical sense, which might be why i find it so interseting. In fact, its probably something that i might have stopped reading a while back, had someone else written it a different way. And yet, i find myself coming back here and checking everyday for updates. Its semi depressing in the way that i cant get enough of.

Anyway, im rambling, but what im trying to say, i think is that i love it and what ever other people say i think your characters are sane and the situations realistic, unlike many fics i\'ve read.

If you stop updating, i will have to kill someone!

~KDarkMaiden

really good chapter!! I loved it!!!

Chapter 17... I am so very impressed with your AMZING use of words!!!

I do like the way that Severus seems to be taking to Hermione slowly, but surely!!! I also like the way that Severus thinks of his mother in so many things!!!

Aubrey seems to be quite stubborn!!! I know that she is young & doesn\'t realize the depth of what she said to her mother, but it had to have hurt Hermione!!! I am curious to see how Hermione & Severus react to her statement!!! Til chapter 18, Deb >^..^<

*Does the \"yea, there is another update or two\" dance*

I\'ve fallen in love with this story. With the characterizations that you have wrapped us up in we cannot move away from them. Not that I would want to as I\'m far too involved with the glorious amount of plot. Thank you ever so much.

Now, though, I have another question -- why are you writing fanfiction? You have a way with words and you can create plot. I know that it may be a way to sharpen your teeth, so to speak, but you can move the earth with words given proper provacation.

Sorry, I\'m pandering on and on about nothing when all I really wanted to say was that you are brilliant and I\'ve been pulled down in your words...but what a lovely way to drown.

Thank you for writing it,
T

Chapter 17

I just wanted to say that I have immensley enjoyed this story. I find the interactions and relationships to be believable, heart-rendering and real. Thank you!

Hi,
I\'m french. I like your story, your description of Hermione\'s and Severus\' feelings aondeonderful. Go on, I like so much !!! And I lke the poems.
Yhank you very much for this story.
Syd.

Come out from under the stairs! That wasn\'t healthy for Harry, and it isn\'t healthy for you! Now that i\'m done mothering, I think this is turning into one of my favorite stories. Hermione and Snape are a bit OOC, but I like that simply for the fact that it makes it different than everything else. (That is what fanfic is all about, right?
;-D ) Having read that this is finished, I have to ask, WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR???? I am looking forward to the rest of the story.