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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always, i love your writing. and even if some have noticed errors, i am sad to say that i was too much into the story to notice:)
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter...Kind of short....but good. I, personally, do not care much about typos...but that is just me. Keep up the good work, and hurry up with the next chapter!!!:P
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely loving this story - please do not stop!!!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so beautiful... but the end of the chapter was a bit sad.... I loved it!!!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bitch, bitch, bitch! That\'s all some people ever do! Yes, I noticed the errors, so what! We are all human and make mistakes. Get to the editing when it\'s good for you! ;c) I\'m happy w/ the frequent updates. You\'re the author, whatever you like I\'m w/ you!
Now about this chapter! LOVED IT! Love how Aubrey, Snape, and Hermione have almost become a whole family. I love how Snape is adjusting the best he can to the situation. I love how Hermione and Aubrey were sensitive to Snape\'s feelings about Easter. As a Christian I am pleased that she wasn\'t portrayed as someone shoving her faith down his throat. I thought that was nice.
This story is so dark, but at the same time parts of it feel like there is a lightness that may just peak through for the characters involved. Hope so!
Now about this chapter! LOVED IT! Love how Aubrey, Snape, and Hermione have almost become a whole family. I love how Snape is adjusting the best he can to the situation. I love how Hermione and Aubrey were sensitive to Snape\'s feelings about Easter. As a Christian I am pleased that she wasn\'t portrayed as someone shoving her faith down his throat. I thought that was nice.
This story is so dark, but at the same time parts of it feel like there is a lightness that may just peak through for the characters involved. Hope so!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22... I am very much enjoying watching this relationship grow!!! Severus has changed a good deal, in a good way!!! I am glad that he cares for them as much as he does!!!
I really like the things she said at Remus\' grave!!! Really makes you think!!! Til chapter 23, Deb >^..^<
I really like the things she said at Remus\' grave!!! Really makes you think!!! Til chapter 23, Deb >^..^<
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg this is so good! When\'s the next chapter? I can\'t Wait!!!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous. That was a truly delicious scene, at the end. And with Anna...! Thank you. I hope there\'s more yet.
~ Jenna.
~ Jenna.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for yet another beautiful chapter. i check it everyday after i get home from work. a million thank yous.
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE HURRY AND POST THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!! plEEEAAAAAAASSSEE