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I decided to start reading all the Snape/Hermione stories on this site, oldest first.  What a remarkable story this is!  So deeply felt, so real, and so hopeful.  Thank you!

This is an utterly amazing story. I loved everything about it. I'm glad that I lived in HU for a year that I understood everything. I also adore literature and you did Snape very well. Great job. Thanks so much!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Dear writer,
Thank you for sharing the most wonderfully moving story I've read on fan fiction in some time. I found myself crying along with the literature you used, and the Nazi references. The Jewish understanding of Snape was totally realistic and I am extremely grateful for being able to see your vision. You have a gift, and I am sincerely pleased you shared it with us readers.
Tasneem

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I just read through your whole story in one sitting, and wanted to make sure that I paid the piper by leaving a few words. It was a compelling and exhausting read with intense and complex characters. Writing as you did seemed to me to show a lot of trust in people, so thank you.

From what I can gather, you and I have very different backgrounds, and different opinions and experiences in regards to religion, but what interests me is that your story shows I think that we place a similar value on how transforming and powerful forgiveness can be. Fanfiction is not a place I typically look for moving considerations on morality or religion, so thank you for that as well.

One final note. The relationship between Dumbledore and Severus was beautiful and had me a little teary.

Take care and keep writing.

"Schwarze Milch der Fr

e.e. cummings

This was one of the most poignant and beautiful stories I have ever read. Even outside of Fanfiction. Yes, there were some grammatical errors, but as you stated, English is not your first language, and your attempt surpasses that of many authors who do speak English as their first language. I hope you continue to write. You really have a gift.

I'm only to chapter 18 in your story and admittedly, it's sort of been odd. I apparently didn't pay attention to any angsty warning. I don't do well with too much angst. But even though what I was reading wasn't the fantasy I wanted, it was so fucking accurate and canon, to me. The characters are exactly as I think they should be written. I was sort of icked out by the pairing of Snape with Vector, but it fit so well with the story you're weaving, and I don't plan to go to sleep till I've finished the entire story. You're an excellent writer, regardless of the rest of the chapters. I love the way you weave a story. It's fucking brilliant, actually. Pay no mind to the nay sayers and absolutely do not stop writing. This is a fantastic read, and quite inspiring.