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June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! That was great...lol...
Megan: A+ for the use of cock and penis
Erica: Sweet...ass...lmao...
Megan: A+ for the use of cock and penis
Erica: Sweet...ass...lmao...
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June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is so funny. I love the readers perspective idea. Plus, Draco knowing about the readers makes it even better.
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It really was quite hilarious, and I got your point loud and clear.
However, there are a FEW good Harry/Draco stories out there. You just have to search for them (The Erotic Adventures of Potter and Malfoy by Keshu, is one of the best I\'ve read)
However, there are a FEW good Harry/Draco stories out there. You just have to search for them (The Erotic Adventures of Potter and Malfoy by Keshu, is one of the best I\'ve read)
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June 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVED the fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FABBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GoRGY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
FABBY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
GoRGY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wickedly funny. I loved it!
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March 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i must say...
this is one of the most amusing fic ive read in a long time.
my friend and i were dying laughing over this.
...mainly, because shes the embodiment of Reader 1, and im Reader 2.
*cough*
anyhow, lovely lovely amusing-ness.
running commentary is probably my most favorite thing ever. ^_^
great job!
~puck
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January 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff. Please don't make me laugh so much. my co-workers now think I'm even more insane than before. (very hard to do, but giggling hystarically in an art gallery full of black and white photos is a little off) Now I have to show this to all of my friends. They'll love it. keep it up (Ha Ha)
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January 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Best H/D smutfic ve rve read. It captures all the facets of their deep anmplemplex relationship. Especially the "I love you after ramming Harry up the ass" part. Keep it cumming. hahahahaha. Good joke, if I say so myself.
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January 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HAhaha!! your fic was really funny! I had a good time with it. I loved the comment between draco and harry in the bath and then the comments of the readers and writer.
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January 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That is VERY funny! LOL! I love the writer commentary and the whole "I love you" comment at the end. How true. I read a lot writers using VERY graphic terminology about ass ramming, only to have it become mushy at the end for no reason. You hit the nail on the head. Hey, this reminds me of a web site I found that features fic that satires fan fic. There was a whole section on how bad smut fic is written, and this would be a WONDERFUL fic to put on that site. I can't remember the name of it, but I think it was something like Bad Fan Fiction or How not to write Fan Ficiton, or something like that. See if you can find it. It features a lot of different genres, and they might post your fic on their site if you ask.